Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 15:56:36 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 77504 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A new definition of the term [time] => 2004-12-28 10:24:45 [hometext] => A stupid poem that no one will believe or can relate to but I promise you it contains only FACTS! From the controversial one. [bodytext] => Yesterday, I felt happy and alive.
I felt like I've been again revived.
My thick walls of steel around me
Have melted from my eyes that can see.
I knew that I wasn't alone.

Then a pure me was mistaken again.
Abandonned discretely in the rain.
From walls of steel to walls of fire
forced to spurn an essential desire.
Alone.

I wanna it to be like in the past
Where I was ugly and I wasn't last
In the closed and open hearts around me.
I really felt the things that I needed to see.
At least, I wasn't alone.

Life has used me like a demonstration
To enrichen others and numb my frustration.
Consealing all of my dreams and desires
That are too me, clear and required.
I'll even name some.

Shopping down town, Playing video games together, Sharing my opinion about others, Jokes,
Talking about my job, Helping each other, And sharing each others happy and dark secrets.

My fate was In your hands.
I don't care if one person abandonnes me
But not EVERYONE if I'm being MYSELF.

Now I guess I'm...
too positive to be valued by a negative person.
too negative to ve valued by a positive person.
I'm just alone and useless.
Just like all my uncared about poems.
Till next time...who am I kidding?
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 21 [informant] => the_escort [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
A new definition of the term

Contributed by the_escort on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 10:24:45 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Yesterday, I felt happy and alive.
I felt like I've been again revived.
My thick walls of steel around me
Have melted from my eyes that can see.
I knew that I wasn't alone.

Then a pure me was mistaken again.
Abandonned discretely in the rain.
From walls of steel to walls of fire
forced to spurn an essential desire.
Alone.

I wanna it to be like in the past
Where I was ugly and I wasn't last
In the closed and open hearts around me.
I really felt the things that I needed to see.
At least, I wasn't alone.

Life has used me like a demonstration
To enrichen others and numb my frustration.
Consealing all of my dreams and desires
That are too me, clear and required.
I'll even name some.

Shopping down town, Playing video games together, Sharing my opinion about others, Jokes,
Talking about my job, Helping each other, And sharing each others happy and dark secrets.

My fate was In your hands.
I don't care if one person abandonnes me
But not EVERYONE if I'm being MYSELF.

Now I guess I'm...
too positive to be valued by a negative person.
too negative to ve valued by a positive person.
I'm just alone and useless.
Just like all my uncared about poems.
Till next time...who am I kidding?




Copyright © the_escort ... [ 2004-12-28 10:24:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: A new definition of the term (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 10:50:33 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I cant agree that no one will relate to this. Look around! It's an uneasy life when you find your polarity changing. And, if you're writing then you are not useless. Go where the winds of change take you and you'll be fine. Blessings.


Re: A new definition of the term (User Rating: 1 )
by the_escort on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:01:09 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Thanks for the encouragement through my difficult times. I really consider what you said, it makes me feel better.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com