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Array ( [sid] => 77480 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Ultimate Game [time] => 2004-12-28 04:38:11 [hometext] => My fiend told me this was a good write, so i posted it. please let me know what you think [bodytext] => Good days, bad days
to me all the same
Living our lives
all we do is play a game

But in the end
we all lose
players and rules
none may we choose

In the end what have we done
Are we the remembered
or the forgotten
Either way
the time lost has rotten

We see it in the news
every day
that another is dead
and on their way
but has their life ended?
or is it just game over? [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 21 [informant] => crash [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
The Ultimate Game

Contributed by crash on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:38:11 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Good days, bad days
to me all the same
Living our lives
all we do is play a game

But in the end
we all lose
players and rules
none may we choose

In the end what have we done
Are we the remembered
or the forgotten
Either way
the time lost has rotten

We see it in the news
every day
that another is dead
and on their way
but has their life ended?
or is it just game over?




Copyright © crash ... [ 2004-12-28 04:38:11]
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Re: The Ultimate Game (User Rating: 1 )
by Row on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 05:47:20 AM AEST
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well it's another way of looking at things isnt it


Re: The Ultimate Game (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 06:22:21 AM AEST
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a nice portrayal of the reality. worth to think over
girish


Re: The Ultimate Game (User Rating: 1 )
by Chaos_is_apon_us on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 11:23:38 PM AEST
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A totally different way to look at it. I like the way it is written, not in any standard form, but still quite true and to the point.
Better dayz
~Jace~




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