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Array ( [sid] => 77469 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => never stop singing(freedom has a new name) [time] => 2004-12-28 00:24:21 [hometext] => Three writings I'm posting tonight are all about a year old(i've been digging through my box) I hope you like^_^ always, abraham [bodytext] => Let go
let the rain take you
let your heart slip
and sink into the placid waters
further than forever
let your voice cry out
the blackened lungs
the bronchial disorders
let them die in your song
let the heart of this country
loose of the bonds
of immorality and greed
let apathy reign
let freedom have a new name
let it be obstinacy
let it be denial
let it be self destruction
apathy and apparel
let this country
know its pain
let it see
the thousand dead children
that hangs from its mast
let it choke on the vomit
of the masses
of every dead junkie
of every broken dream
let it know its name
and let it know
that we will never
stop singing. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 48 [informant] => iodinelove [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

never stop singing(freedom has a new name)

Contributed by iodinelove on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 12:24:21 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Let go
let the rain take you
let your heart slip
and sink into the placid waters
further than forever
let your voice cry out
the blackened lungs
the bronchial disorders
let them die in your song
let the heart of this country
loose of the bonds
of immorality and greed
let apathy reign
let freedom have a new name
let it be obstinacy
let it be denial
let it be self destruction
apathy and apparel
let this country
know its pain
let it see
the thousand dead children
that hangs from its mast
let it choke on the vomit
of the masses
of every dead junkie
of every broken dream
let it know its name
and let it know
that we will never
stop singing.

Copyright © iodinelove ... [ 2004-12-28 00:24:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: never stop singing(freedom has a new name) (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 12:39:49 AM AEST
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wow, i really liked this abraham, its very honest its great.a wicked write, i love it. good job!!

Re: never stop singing(freedom has a new name) (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 12:40:06 AM AEST
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wow, this is really good, well done!!!!

Re: never stop singing(freedom has a new name) (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 02:29:31 AM AEST
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Oh i like this, but the only thing i noticed was there's no flow which kinda sucks; but overall this is a good write.

Hugs,
Jane x

Re: never stop singing(freedom has a new name) (User Rating: 1 )
by Sapphire_Blue on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:48:43 AM AEST
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Beautifully written poem composed with magic and clarity, awesome and cool to read.

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