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Everytime!!

Contributed by poetrygirl1991 on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 10:10:18 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Everytime i look into his eyes...my heart melts,
everytime he walks closer to me......my teeth chatter.
Then when he whispers in my ear.....my mind goes blank.
I just wish i could share these thoughts with him, wish he felt the same!

My guy, my chris....hes different then any other guy...he cares bout everybody,
he makes everyone believe there is a bright side to everything!
He is trustworthy in every way,
He sure knows how to lighten up everyones day.
The only thing is he is in lust with some one else, im in love with him, but my feelings just show right through him.
He doesnt love me the same way....HE wont come to me......only me....
He cant save my day! He has some one elses day to save instead.
all i can do is cry to myself and wish for him to change his mind.....but yet to be happy no matter what happens, and thats what i wish of chris although words cant possibly describe how i feel for him!! Nothing will ever be able to change that either, whether he feels the same or not....
In my heart he means alot!!




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Re: Everytime!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 10:23:21 PM AEST
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Aww I've felt this way before. I hope things work out for you.


Re: Everytime!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Gigi_15 on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 10:24:30 PM AEST
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Hey hon this is a great poem! I think you should tell him how you feel. And see how he reacts.Try being his friend hang outwith him. . Show him you care..you never know hw could start liking u!!!


Re: Everytime!! (User Rating: 1 )
by blossomingcherry5353 on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:16:20 PM AEST
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Great poem, I've felt that way about a boy also but he had a girlfriend. Read my poem Please Remember Me it's about the boy I was just talking about.

shannon


Re: Everytime!! (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:16:28 PM AEST
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i think you should tell him how you feel.
by the way good write.


Re: Everytime!! (User Rating: 1 )
by hoidy on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:23:49 PM AEST
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I agree with everyone-you should tell him how you feel. Even if you are friends for a while it might just be worth it. My girlfriend and I were great friends for four years before we started dating. If he is as good as you say, he is worth the wait.
- hoidy


Re: Everytime!! (User Rating: 1 )
by mrj061390 on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:24:23 PM AEST
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Great write!!!
Tell you him how u feel!
It can't make things worse!
xoxo
Mishel Renee


Re: Everytime!! (User Rating: 1 )
by girish on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 12:15:50 AM AEST
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beauticul love verses. read my love poems like "The gift of her eye-sight" and more I think that your person will also write one like my verses.
girish


Re: Everytime!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 12:56:26 AM AEST
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Great poem.

Spazzo


Re: Everytime!! (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 02:50:42 AM AEST
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Aww girl you gotta tell him how you feel, it'll make you feel beter. Good poem tho.

Hugs,
Jane x


Re: Everytime!! (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 10:38:13 AM AEST
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I was touched by the emotional content within this wonderful poem created by a very talented poet. I am sorry he does not see the real quality within You and the warm Love You want and have for him within Your Heart. He will feel bad and maybe realize what He could have had when You give Your Love to another special someone. Its sad that people never realize what they have until its gone and then its too late. Great Job. I want to Thank You for sharing Your wonderfyl creative talent of poetry with myself and the world and a little of yourself. Please, keep those creative thoughts flowing so Your Beautiful poetry keeps growing. Your Reading Fan, Mickey Pig Knuckles :)


Re: Everytime!! (User Rating: 1 )
by unforgiven on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 03:55:30 PM AEST
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hey, u asked and i read ur poem and i don't think u need to change anything about it! it's a great write in which i can feel every emotion u wanted and tried to convey. i only wish that things work out with u and this guy because i know what it's like coz i've been in the same situation (most of my poems r about him) lol....so i hope things work out, keep writing these great poems and never doubt ur skill or talent because u have so much. don't take it from me, the amount of great comments u have recieved already should tell u something!!
~becca~


Re: Everytime!! (User Rating: 1 )
by punkhead13 on Friday, 14th January 2005 @ 07:02:52 PM AEST
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wow, that's really good. Keep it up, don't change a thing!!!
~SARAH~




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