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neglect...To: my dad
Contributed by
Rottenrioter
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Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:29:19 PM in AEST
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SadPoetry
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You left me here all alone
In this bitter deadend orld
No one to Look up to
No more chances of hope
Where have you gone?
Now that I need you most
Youre not here to help me with my pain
With out you here Im lost and broken
I need you now more than ever
Now that Im older
Im so lost with out you here with me by my side telling me right from wrong
I miss you
i need you.....
Here with me
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2004-12-27 19:29:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: neglect...To: my dad
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:33:38 PM AEST (User
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This is so sad, but your feelings shone through. Great write. |
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Re: neglect...To: my dad
(User Rating: 1 ) by Essentially9 on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 09:09:14 PM AEST (User
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excellent write. i have about five poems like this about my own dad. sometimes what we think we need, we dont actually need at all. |
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