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It's taking me away
Contributed by
StrwBrryStrBrst0225
on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:20:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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.... this pain
It's something that overcame,
all happiness....
theres no more happiness in me....
This life i knew,
well i mite as well not have a clue...
I fail at evrything i do.....
I was the one that knew
exactly how to control how i felt,
now i feel like i'm falling...
and i can taste death on my lips,
i can feel the chill of the thrill thats there...
i can feel it grasp my throat
and as i try try to breath , speak....
i choke on my words....
this pain it trys to smuther
and it hovers over all the good things in life...
turning me blind .
I lie here just barely under the sufurce...
I feel like i'll die here, barely aware...
This pain takes away eveything...
and it's taking away my life
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Re: It's taking me away
(User Rating: 1 ) by autumngreeneyes on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:24:47 PM AEST (User
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I recognize this feeling..joyless..happiness gone..nothing goes right..this is exactly right. |
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Re: It's taking me away
(User Rating: 1 ) by Spazzo on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:26:05 PM AEST (User
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This is very good. I can relate. I hope things get better. |
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