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[aid] => mick
[title] => wrong
[time] => 2004-12-27 18:47:30
[hometext] => this came from having to much trust in the people you thought loved you as a child
[bodytext] => on a cold night/ the warmth of your skin/ up against mine/ is like a cold bath in the summertime/ it begins as if you only want to comfort me/from my fears/ then it comes up that you want to kiss me/ on my forehead and rub your fingers through my hair/My hair; as if you and I are comfortable/ so unaware/ i just lay back and chill/you crawl on top and begin to kiss me/ from head to toe/ removing one piece of clothing one by one/ you keep on and here i am clueless/ telling me to turn over while you caress my neck to my shoulders/ then to my mid-back/ to my lower/ You kiss me sloftly at the top of my buttocks/ and turn me over to lay on my back/ i'm laying here wondering what to do/ so scared and so alone/ thinking is this where i belong? you start to squeeze and rub on my very young breast/ then start to suckle on them in such a sensitive way/ Starting to feel a sensation i never felt before/ i become dumbfounded/ you rise up to kiss me on my lips and begin to remove your pants/ within a split second you begin to enter to enter the head into my unfamiliar area/ you realize it's so tight/ so you go really slow/ until you are able to pick up the motion/ realizing i was in pain/ you begin to slow down and i begin to cry/ this was wrong and my childhood was taken away from me/ no longer pure and innocent/ little baby Yana was gone/ her innocence was taken by her very own stepfather at the age of ten/ now transformed into a confused young lady/tell me isn't that wrong???
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wrong
Contributed by
k_kelly
on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 06:47:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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on a cold night/ the warmth of your skin/ up against mine/ is like a cold bath in the summertime/ it begins as if you only want to comfort me/from my fears/ then it comes up that you want to kiss me/ on my forehead and rub your fingers through my hair/My hair; as if you and I are comfortable/ so unaware/ i just lay back and chill/you crawl on top and begin to kiss me/ from head to toe/ removing one piece of clothing one by one/ you keep on and here i am clueless/ telling me to turn over while you caress my neck to my shoulders/ then to my mid-back/ to my lower/ You kiss me sloftly at the top of my buttocks/ and turn me over to lay on my back/ i'm laying here wondering what to do/ so scared and so alone/ thinking is this where i belong? you start to squeeze and rub on my very young breast/ then start to suckle on them in such a sensitive way/ Starting to feel a sensation i never felt before/ i become dumbfounded/ you rise up to kiss me on my lips and begin to remove your pants/ within a split second you begin to enter to enter the head into my unfamiliar area/ you realize it's so tight/ so you go really slow/ until you are able to pick up the motion/ realizing i was in pain/ you begin to slow down and i begin to cry/ this was wrong and my childhood was taken away from me/ no longer pure and innocent/ little baby Yana was gone/ her innocence was taken by her very own stepfather at the age of ten/ now transformed into a confused young lady/tell me isn't that wrong???
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Re: wrong
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by Spazzo on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 06:51:35 PM AEST
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This is so sad and horrible that, that happened. I hope things go good for you.
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Re: wrong
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by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:31:47 PM AEST
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| this is terrifying, i was molested as a child by a relative and this brought back so many memories... well done and i hope the best for you!! |
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Re: wrong
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by Lurking_Shadow on
Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 01:31:50 PM AEST
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OMG, I hope you're better now. You can never have that much trust towards someone, keep your distance. Breathtaking poem, I'll tell you that much.
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