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Array ( [sid] => 77415 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sad Eyes [time] => 2004-12-27 18:30:46 [hometext] => This poem reflects my struggles of self confidence. Thanx to my friends and loved ones I no longer struggle as I use too. Enjoy! [bodytext] => Sad Eyes:

Those sad eyes cannot hide
The secerets that lie inside
You look into those eyes and see all the trouble of it's thoughts,
You see the reason of their sadness, all the battles they have fought
Eyes that live through pain
Eyes of the unloved
Eyes in which just traumas gain
Virgin eyes that have no sense
Naked eyes without no lense
Eyes that are emotionless
Eyes that see everything meaningless
Lifeless eyes, that need to see the meaning of it all
Eyes that deeply gaze into yours, like those of a tortured doll
Stare into those sad eyes, and tell me what you see
Tell me if you found a solution, for those sad eyes belong to me
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Sad Eyes

Contributed by Lurking_Shadow on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 06:30:46 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Sad Eyes:

Those sad eyes cannot hide
The secerets that lie inside
You look into those eyes and see all the trouble of it's thoughts,
You see the reason of their sadness, all the battles they have fought
Eyes that live through pain
Eyes of the unloved
Eyes in which just traumas gain
Virgin eyes that have no sense
Naked eyes without no lense
Eyes that are emotionless
Eyes that see everything meaningless
Lifeless eyes, that need to see the meaning of it all
Eyes that deeply gaze into yours, like those of a tortured doll
Stare into those sad eyes, and tell me what you see
Tell me if you found a solution, for those sad eyes belong to me

Copyright © Lurking_Shadow ... [ 2004-12-27 18:30:46]
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Re: Sad Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by K_kelly on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 07:09:04 PM AEST
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it seems as though i know where you are coming from, no one has rescued me from my sad eyes yet, i am happy you have glad eyes now:-)

Re: Sad Eyes (User Rating: 1 )
by Avernus on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 03:48:53 AM AEST
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Your are a wonderful writer....simply beautiful

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