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Array ( [sid] => 77410 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Dear Meghan [time] => 2004-12-27 18:16:18 [hometext] => [bodytext] => This is dedicated to my cousin meghan!!!
Hey meg, we've gone through everything together so i thought u deserved this!!!

I remember when we were about 4 years old, singing in the mirrors of our fathers' houses! I remember playing barbies, every single time we were with one another , i remember the times one of us started crying over the smallest things so the other one started crying too.I remember playing at our grandparents house, swimming in the pool. But then everything changed! Our grandparents moved my mom got married once again, our times together were slowly fading away.
THen i moved back to my father's house{like i had before} and our bond was becoming closer once again, to each other, we were like best friends!! Then your mom met Jay and they got married , and you moved with them in Canada! we were once again separated.
Then being tipical 12 year olds, we started calling boys, starting with with peter ending with chris, our parents always made the biggest of deals over this!!{lol}We were once again having a space, i was here u , u were there! i was at volleyball and school dances, and u were at baseball and soccer! we were once again parted!
Then u showed up at my last volleyball game, and sure meant a lot to me, we hung out for the whole weekend, talking and catching up on old times!! About your crushes, and of course mine!{lol} We talked bout dances, we sung to karoake and we planned my 13th b-day party!!
My 13th was awesome we hung out with bubblezz, regis, beany, blondie, sarina, and ape. {LAUREN, britney, katie, lauren, sarina, april} we once again jammed to karoake! we hung out barely eva after that!!
Yet i wish times were like old times, that we could bring back old times, even if we were required once again to sing in the mirrors, of my room. I loved tubing on your dads boat and wished we wouldve gotten a chance this yea, just thinking bout our old times makes me shead a few tears!!
then xmas came along and we got an excellent gift from your dad and step mom! i cant wait to go to Splash Lagoon it will be awesome, my dream is slowly becoming true. {no matter what always believe in yourslef, becuz dreams do come true}
Luv ya, your cuz,
Chrissy aka Twixyy [comments] => 2 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 16 [informant] => poetrygirl1991 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
Dear Meghan

Contributed by poetrygirl1991 on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 06:16:18 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



This is dedicated to my cousin meghan!!!
Hey meg, we've gone through everything together so i thought u deserved this!!!

I remember when we were about 4 years old, singing in the mirrors of our fathers' houses! I remember playing barbies, every single time we were with one another , i remember the times one of us started crying over the smallest things so the other one started crying too.I remember playing at our grandparents house, swimming in the pool. But then everything changed! Our grandparents moved my mom got married once again, our times together were slowly fading away.
THen i moved back to my father's house{like i had before} and our bond was becoming closer once again, to each other, we were like best friends!! Then your mom met Jay and they got married , and you moved with them in Canada! we were once again separated.
Then being tipical 12 year olds, we started calling boys, starting with with peter ending with chris, our parents always made the biggest of deals over this!!{lol}We were once again having a space, i was here u , u were there! i was at volleyball and school dances, and u were at baseball and soccer! we were once again parted!
Then u showed up at my last volleyball game, and sure meant a lot to me, we hung out for the whole weekend, talking and catching up on old times!! About your crushes, and of course mine!{lol} We talked bout dances, we sung to karoake and we planned my 13th b-day party!!
My 13th was awesome we hung out with bubblezz, regis, beany, blondie, sarina, and ape. {LAUREN, britney, katie, lauren, sarina, april} we once again jammed to karoake! we hung out barely eva after that!!
Yet i wish times were like old times, that we could bring back old times, even if we were required once again to sing in the mirrors, of my room. I loved tubing on your dads boat and wished we wouldve gotten a chance this yea, just thinking bout our old times makes me shead a few tears!!
then xmas came along and we got an excellent gift from your dad and step mom! i cant wait to go to Splash Lagoon it will be awesome, my dream is slowly becoming true. {no matter what always believe in yourslef, becuz dreams do come true}
Luv ya, your cuz,
Chrissy aka Twixyy




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Re: Dear Meghan (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 08:55:10 PM AEST
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Theres a good bit of error in this, but aside from that, it has a lot of promise, more you have a lot of promise....if you keep it up you'll be a damn good writer....singing in the mirrors of our fathers houses.....that's fantastic.....there are not many i would raise a cup to, but i raise my cup to you, keep it up....a little hint, try blind brainstorming....it's where you turn off your computer screen and write...don't worry about spelling or form or anything....people tend to get stuck in the ruts when they try to follow form.....poetry is formless.....it's raw...it's like skining yourself....all the crap on top to get to the bone....the structure lay within the words...not the punctuation

always, abraham


Re: Dear Meghan (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 05:43:53 PM AEST
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Beautiful message, but it sounds more like a letter than a poem. Other than that is good.

Spazzo




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