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Array ( [sid] => 77386 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hallucinations [time] => 2004-12-27 14:49:21 [hometext] => ::shrugs:: mom said that I hallucinate too much [bodytext] => You want hallucinations? I'll give you hallucinations
You don't even know the defination
How about staying up until four in the morning
Because your nightmares decide you need recognition?

How about trembling and shaking from the cold of the fear
And diving under the covers from frights
I'm being eaten alive by these "hallucinations"
They keep me awake all night

But you say they're not real that I'm doing it on purpose
That I do it so much it's a habit
But no mommy dearest you're wrong again
If you knew me at all you'd see they're savage

By savage I mean deadly they eat me alive
In fact they stay on my surface
So when I scream at night and call your name
I'm not doing it on freakin purpose [comments] => 2 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 13 [informant] => upomik [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Hallucinations

Contributed by upomik on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:49:21 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You want hallucinations? I'll give you hallucinations
You don't even know the defination
How about staying up until four in the morning
Because your nightmares decide you need recognition?

How about trembling and shaking from the cold of the fear
And diving under the covers from frights
I'm being eaten alive by these "hallucinations"
They keep me awake all night

But you say they're not real that I'm doing it on purpose
That I do it so much it's a habit
But no mommy dearest you're wrong again
If you knew me at all you'd see they're savage

By savage I mean deadly they eat me alive
In fact they stay on my surface
So when I scream at night and call your name
I'm not doing it on freakin purpose

Copyright © upomik ... [ 2004-12-27 14:49:21]
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Re: Hallucinations (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 05:16:34 PM AEST
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hallucinations are scary, I've had them too,
you might wanna go see a doctor if they continue. Good writing though.

Re: Hallucinations (User Rating: 1 )
by Avernus on Saturday, 26th March 2005 @ 04:02:17 AM AEST
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Sometimes what you think are hallucinations are really there
Wonderful piece

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