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Array ( [sid] => 77356 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Exits Revisited [time] => 2004-12-27 03:14:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I need rest.
I am tired.
The deep sea looks friendly.
Can she help me sleep?

I need rest.
I am tired.
The sharp knife looks able.
Can it help me sleep?

I need rest.
I am tired.
The poison pills look simple.
Can they help me sleep?

I need rest.
I am tired.
Sleep looks so pleasant.
But can it find me peace?

For I hold
Nothingness
Like a burden on my back.

I hope
To exchange
My hopelessness
For the comfort of
Goodbye. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 36 [informant] => saint858 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 21 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Exits Revisited

Contributed by saint858 on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 03:14:56 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I need rest.
I am tired.
The deep sea looks friendly.
Can she help me sleep?

I need rest.
I am tired.
The sharp knife looks able.
Can it help me sleep?

I need rest.
I am tired.
The poison pills look simple.
Can they help me sleep?

I need rest.
I am tired.
Sleep looks so pleasant.
But can it find me peace?

For I hold
Nothingness
Like a burden on my back.

I hope
To exchange
My hopelessness
For the comfort of
Goodbye.

Copyright © saint858 ... [ 2004-12-27 03:14:56]
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Re: Exits Revisited (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 03:28:46 AM AEST
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good write i didn't really understand it but pretty good keep it up

Re: Exits Revisited (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 03:40:47 AM AEST
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wow this is really good, well done!

Re: Exits Revisited (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 04:31:11 AM AEST
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I have no problem understanding but I pray it's only awesome writing.
faith, hope, joy, peace,
emy
p.m. me anytime

Re: Exits Revisited (User Rating: 1 )
by Evilcaf on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 05:44:37 AM AEST
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I understand it only to well, please dont do anything rash. Its a very good writing and look forward to reading more! .. luv Caf xx

Re: Exits Revisited (User Rating: 1 )
by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:51:32 AM AEST
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Wow, I thought this was excellent...really good job here

Mason

Re: Exits Revisited (User Rating: 1 )
by flat_line on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:19:30 PM AEST
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great write. i like the style of the poem and how you ended it with peace. hang in there

Lauren

Re: Exits Revisited (User Rating: 1 )
by Sensommar on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 06:15:53 AM AEST
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Leaving means leaving it like it is
in its emptiness
Staying is everthing
Stay and leave footprints ..
I like your poem a lot
With love Pia

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