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Array ( [sid] => 77304 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shut Up [time] => 2004-12-26 12:10:25 [hometext] => I got this idea from three songs from Simple Plan. I do feel this way though. [bodytext] => I am tired of listening to you
Telling me what to be
Stop telling me what to do
SHUT UP
I am not your barbie
Let me be my own person
I don't wan't to be your puppet
SHUT UP
Every night I lock my door
And turn up my radio so loud
That no one can hear me crying
SHUT UP
Let me be me.
No more
I am on the edge
And you aren't there to save me
SHUT UP
Let me talk for myself
Leave me alone
Let me have peace
SHUT UP
I want space
I can find my way
Just go. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 223 [topic] => 6 [informant] => DesolantDreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Shut Up

Contributed by DesolantDreamer on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:10:25 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I am tired of listening to you
Telling me what to be
Stop telling me what to do
SHUT UP
I am not your barbie
Let me be my own person
I don't wan't to be your puppet
SHUT UP
Every night I lock my door
And turn up my radio so loud
That no one can hear me crying
SHUT UP
Let me be me.
No more
I am on the edge
And you aren't there to save me
SHUT UP
Let me talk for myself
Leave me alone
Let me have peace
SHUT UP
I want space
I can find my way
Just go.

Copyright © DesolantDreamer ... [ 2004-12-26 12:10:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Shut Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:23:19 PM AEST
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I don't know much by Simple Plan but I loved your poem. If you ever did feel like this, I'm sure this poem helped you vent. Great write.

Re: Shut Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Penguin_chick on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:28:06 PM AEST
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i think a lot of people get ideas from songs.. and thats cool... i know i do.. but reading certain things over and over.. is redundant... like the crying part.. ive heard that too many times... even one of my poems has that in it (in different words of course) but good poem! i loved it.. and i know totally how you feel

Re: Shut Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Unspoken_Love on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 10:40:28 PM AEST
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wow I really like this poem, and I have like like this so many times before.. this is really a great poem.. good job!

Re: Shut Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Flicker on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 09:40:54 AM AEST
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i know alot about simple plan.and i too have felt that way before so dont feel alone.and again im here to talk if you need it.
keep up the great writing,your a good poet
your friend,
***Missy***

Re: Shut Up (User Rating: 1 )
by weezer21 on Thursday, 30th December 2004 @ 04:11:37 AM AEST
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i liked the poem but it was too much from simple plan's shut up and welcome to my life just go with ur own stuff more...still a great write tho

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