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SultryRose's Signatures






Yes, She's alone with her
cats, t.v. computor, this-n-that.
She uses herb to kill her pain.
Neva goes away completely
jus enuff so she can
see thru it.

Her life of solitude
gives her time
to help others-n-pray
her lite shines.
Sometimes insomnia hits
rite tween her lines
48 hrs.time after time.

She reaches out
to others in pain,
down hearted from rain.
Her soul neva was
her own.
At such a little girl
'twas stripped away.
She forgot how to play.
She neva gave her body
"cause she wanted to.
Was only thing she's
programed to do.

A knight came-n-found
her lost soul,
taught her verbally
how to rock-n-roll.
Now she wants him
to know he found her soul.
Can u dig it?

luv u T.B.

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CAN U DIG IT?

Contributed by emystar on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:03:01 AM in AEST
Topic: oops


















SultryRose's Signatures






Yes, She's alone with her
cats, t.v. computor, this-n-that.
She uses herb to kill her pain.
Neva goes away completely
jus enuff so she can
see thru it.

Her life of solitude
gives her time
to help others-n-pray
her lite shines.
Sometimes insomnia hits
rite tween her lines
48 hrs.time after time.

She reaches out
to others in pain,
down hearted from rain.
Her soul neva was
her own.
At such a little girl
'twas stripped away.
She forgot how to play.
She neva gave her body
"cause she wanted to.
Was only thing she's
programed to do.

A knight came-n-found
her lost soul,
taught her verbally
how to rock-n-roll.
Now she wants him
to know he found her soul.
Can u dig it?

luv u T.B.





Copyright © emystar ... [ 2004-12-26 04:03:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: CAN U DIG IT? (User Rating: 1 )
by Loyalist on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:12:19 AM AEST
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Rattle on! I reread this 3 times and each time I liked it more.

"She reaches out
to others in pain,
down hearted from rain.
Her soul neva was
her own.
At such a little girl
'twas stripped away.
She forgot how to play.
She neva gave her body
"cause she wanted to.
Was only thing she's
programed to do."

The above is my favorite part. Thanks for reading my opinion.


Re: CAN U DIG IT? (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:54:32 PM AEST
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never gave her body because she wanted to..
yes I can dig it....

excellent write


Re: CAN U DIG IT? (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 04:51:09 PM AEST
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Nice one grrlfriend....
Hugs
Jenni


Re: CAN U DIG IT? (User Rating: 1 )
by SavingMarion on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 06:12:13 PM AEST
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i can dig it


Re: CAN U DIG IT? (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 11:00:24 PM AEST
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Yeah, I dig it. Awesome write.

Spazzo


Re: CAN U DIG IT? (User Rating: 1 )
by sweetangeluk on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 03:43:21 PM AEST
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Excellent wow great rattle.

Love Sweetangelukxxx


Re: CAN U DIG IT? (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 03:42:57 AM AEST
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Yup i dig it gf. a very cool write.

Hugs,
Jane x


Re: CAN U DIG IT? (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 03:35:01 PM AEST
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yeah sweet girl i dig it.
i love your poetry keep it coming babe
luv,
sue




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