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Array ( [sid] => 77271 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Desecending Friendship [time] => 2004-12-26 00:57:40 [hometext] => This is sorta about my friend jordy he didnt wanna tlak to me and i thought he was mad and hes one of my bestfriends i still dont know whats up wwith him cause he lives in a city nnow and i live in a small town and i havent talked to him...its real short [bodytext] => You dont want to talk to me
Your too good for our friendship to be
Its your attitude you've exchanged
From good to bad you've arranged
You were such a good friend
I didnt want our friendship to desecend
Your gone to the city you moved
Its our friendship you havent proved
But I still love you
Even with all the horrible thing you do [comments] => 4 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 16 [informant] => sick_n_twisted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )

Desecending Friendship

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:57:40 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

You dont want to talk to me
Your too good for our friendship to be
Its your attitude you've exchanged
From good to bad you've arranged
You were such a good friend
I didnt want our friendship to desecend
Your gone to the city you moved
Its our friendship you havent proved
But I still love you
Even with all the horrible thing you do

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2004-12-26 00:57:40]
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Re: Desecending Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by hellsfallenangel on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 01:35:12 AM AEST
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hey nice write read mine ok

DEMON

Re: Desecending Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by smooshable on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 01:54:40 AM AEST
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I really like this poem! Your friend has moved away and moved on from you and your life and you write about it like he died. I know when you lose a friend in this way its just about as bad as if they'd actually died. They are dead to you. Its a really good analogy for the situation, wish I'd thought of it! (I hope you did it intentionally hehehehe)

Re: Desecending Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 12:49:59 AM AEST
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Nice poem. You express your feelings well. I've felt that way before with friends that have moved away too.

Thanks for your comment :-)

Re: Desecending Friendship (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 04:51:29 PM AEST
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THANX for your guys comment i really appreicate it! that peope actaully read my poetry c ya!

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