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Array ( [sid] => 77260 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You’re lying beside her now [time] => 2004-12-25 22:36:01 [hometext] => This is a poem I wrote with pUnKa_RaCh I think it came out great and could not have done it with out her the way I been feeling lately [bodytext] => Hold me in your arms
For tonight you are stronger than
I and I need you

As the magic in your eyes that consumes me grows
My heart is begging for all it knows
The one true love that can never be spent
So I write this to you as my feelings vent
Tell me what you want of I can’t take this anymore
I have never loved anyone like his before

It’s no longer possible for you to be mine anymore
You’re lying beside her now, and I lie faithless and numb on the floor
Whenever I hear her name with yours, I feel shattered and blue,
Why has she got what I want? All I really want is you
I could give you so much more, all my love and heart,
But you didn’t seem to care, you weren’t sad we had to part

You said you knew we were meant to be you thought so from the start
But then you hurt every piece of me after I had given you my all even my heart
After what you did to me how can I love anyone again?
How can I trust anyone again if I feel I will be hurt even then?
What can I do if I can’t love someone as much as I did you?
I beg you don’t make me mourn you I don’t know what to do

I’m left here alone, my soul crushed and in a mess,
I can’t stop thinking of you; I love you I have to confess
But why does this love pain me so?
I can’t stand what you did; I hated everyday, just wanting to let you go
So take a second and realize what you've done,
Breaking my spirit just for your one night of fun

You broke my heart once
Then you broke it once again
You can’t be trusted
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You’re lying beside her now

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 10:36:01 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



Hold me in your arms
For tonight you are stronger than
I and I need you

As the magic in your eyes that consumes me grows
My heart is begging for all it knows
The one true love that can never be spent
So I write this to you as my feelings vent
Tell me what you want of I can’t take this anymore
I have never loved anyone like his before

It’s no longer possible for you to be mine anymore
You’re lying beside her now, and I lie faithless and numb on the floor
Whenever I hear her name with yours, I feel shattered and blue,
Why has she got what I want? All I really want is you
I could give you so much more, all my love and heart,
But you didn’t seem to care, you weren’t sad we had to part

You said you knew we were meant to be you thought so from the start
But then you hurt every piece of me after I had given you my all even my heart
After what you did to me how can I love anyone again?
How can I trust anyone again if I feel I will be hurt even then?
What can I do if I can’t love someone as much as I did you?
I beg you don’t make me mourn you I don’t know what to do

I’m left here alone, my soul crushed and in a mess,
I can’t stop thinking of you; I love you I have to confess
But why does this love pain me so?
I can’t stand what you did; I hated everyday, just wanting to let you go
So take a second and realize what you've done,
Breaking my spirit just for your one night of fun

You broke my heart once
Then you broke it once again
You can’t be trusted




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Re: You’re lying beside her now (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 11:05:28 PM AEST
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I couldn't get into a rythem.. but I liked the words a lot.


Re: You’re lying beside her now (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 12:17:01 AM AEST
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you can't be trusted


I like this line, Great job.


Re: You’re lying beside her now (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 01:18:02 AM AEST
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Lovely words are used in this poem, such a sad write.

Hugs,
Jane x


Re: You’re lying beside her now (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 10:53:08 AM AEST
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I knew you didnt mean all that you said to me lol


Re: You’re lying beside her now (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 11:51:08 AM AEST
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I found this slightly hard to read as it did not have one single flow.
It seemed to be flowing in different directions at the same time.
But I really liked the words and what it was trying to say...
It is a very good poem and holds alot of different emotion.





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