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SPHERE
Contributed by
KOZMICSPIRID
on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 06:40:27 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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I don't know wheater to end or continue this story
should i give up and contribute to the fury
must we breed and pollute
avoid reason
displaced in society, lost in the seasons
i waited and hoped for the arrival of the dream
i sat back and stared at the unimanigable scene
the throttle stuck on the consumption gear
can we evolve and rid of the fear
a new tomarrow
simple and clear
a few that are left
will cherish with love the sacred sphere
Copyright ©
KOZMICSPIRID
... [
2004-12-25 18:40:27]
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Re: SPHERE
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by xxbreathlessx on
Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 06:47:06 PM AEST
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| its a good poem, i like how your feelings come out here. keep on writing =D |
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Re: SPHERE
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by sweetdemoness on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:45:05 PM AEST
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| hey there...this is a really meaningful poem. I liked it. I like how it sounds kind of like a song. And how it rymes so well. Great job. |
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