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Array ( [sid] => 77186 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You!! [time] => 2004-12-24 23:36:54 [hometext] => this poem is baout my mom and my dad and its true too its not all that good but its oneof my favortie poems that i've written so far [bodytext] => You wonder why I'm so morbid
You blame it on my music
You left me alone to have your booze
You left me crying on the front step
Everyday just waiting for you
I didnt even know why I wanted and love you so much
I wanted you to get back with my dad
I prayed and i got it
But now I want you broken up
You used to get beaten up
Now you just argue everyday
Every time you drink
Even when you dont drink
You fight all day and night
Why are you still together?
Who ever said love can do crazy things is right!
Who ever said love is blind is right!
Now I'm scared to fall in love
What if my worst nightmare comes true
To be Like you!

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 231 [topic] => 6 [informant] => sick_n_twisted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

You!!

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 11:36:54 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You wonder why I'm so morbid
You blame it on my music
You left me alone to have your booze
You left me crying on the front step
Everyday just waiting for you
I didnt even know why I wanted and love you so much
I wanted you to get back with my dad
I prayed and i got it
But now I want you broken up
You used to get beaten up
Now you just argue everyday
Every time you drink
Even when you dont drink
You fight all day and night
Why are you still together?
Who ever said love can do crazy things is right!
Who ever said love is blind is right!
Now I'm scared to fall in love
What if my worst nightmare comes true
To be Like you!

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2004-12-24 23:36:54]
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Re: You!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 11:41:02 PM AEST
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I feel the same way about love. Don't trust or open up to anyone and you won't get hurt. Great write.

Re: You!! (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsLuster on Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 02:14:40 AM AEST
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That's some deep stuff right there. It really depicts your story. I'm sorry to hear all that.

But you shouldn't be so glum about love because Love is actually really great. It's just really hard to find real love. But I'll tell you that I have found what I think is real love and it's great!!

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