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[aid] => mick
[title] => The One That Cared
[time] => 2004-12-24 21:13:36
[hometext] => To a dear friend of mine... I couldn't survive without him, literally. He has always been there for me. *Thank you Darren
[bodytext] => Things will never be the way,
That I so much want them to,
But I wouldn't even be here,
If you hadn't helped me through.
* * *
The meaning of life is something,
That I often stopped to wonder,
But the empty, loss of answers,
Pulled me down and held me under.
Feeling grief, feeling pain,
Overwhelmed by all the strife,
Wanting to go, wanting to leave,
And forever end my life.
Many sleepless nights,
And so many painful tears,
Holding tight to my hope of,
'Just a few more years...'
* * *
You understood, you knew,
You showed me that you cared,
And for that, I thank you so,
And thus my life was spared.
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The One That Cared
Contributed by
Mesano
on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 09:13:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Things will never be the way,
That I so much want them to,
But I wouldn't even be here,
If you hadn't helped me through.
* * *
The meaning of life is something,
That I often stopped to wonder,
But the empty, loss of answers,
Pulled me down and held me under.
Feeling grief, feeling pain,
Overwhelmed by all the strife,
Wanting to go, wanting to leave,
And forever end my life.
Many sleepless nights,
And so many painful tears,
Holding tight to my hope of,
'Just a few more years...'
* * *
You understood, you knew,
You showed me that you cared,
And for that, I thank you so,
And thus my life was spared.
Copyright ©
Mesano
... [
2004-12-24 21:13:36] (Date/Time posted on
site)
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Re: The One That Cared
(User Rating: 1 ) by EternalNight4x on
Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 09:23:35 PM AEST (User
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excellent write, it's great you have someone there to help you through. Well keep up the great write |
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Re: The One That Cared
(User Rating: 1 ) by Dawny on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 12:55:48 PM AEST (User
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This is a touching tribute to your friend, and an excellent poem, crammed with emotion...I love it!!!
Love Dawny xxx |
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