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I'm standing in a mirror...
With no face...
And no space...
Could this reflection be shattered any less.
Just me...
Jumping on a thin stretch of air...
If it breaks will you catch me...
In a thin red hoodie...covered in sleet...
I stand next to you...
shivering from the cold...
shut your mouth and listen to me tremble...
like an earthquake I split wide open...
spilling over the lies....
and the back I see that should be your face.
No one hears me...
You suffocate me...
And that gift of breath I thought you gave sincerely
Floated away with all the lies you mentioned.
To me...
To her...
To him...
To them...
...To you... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 267 [topic] => 50 [informant] => Sirena_Degana [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ApologyPoetry )

Suffering Sadness

Contributed by Sirena_Degana on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 07:04:17 PM in AEST
Topic: ApologyPoetry

Just to let you know...
I'm standing in a mirror...
With no face...
And no space...
Could this reflection be shattered any less.
Just me...
Jumping on a thin stretch of air...
If it breaks will you catch me...
In a thin red hoodie...covered in sleet...
I stand next to you...
shivering from the cold...
shut your mouth and listen to me tremble...
like an earthquake I split wide open...
spilling over the lies....
and the back I see that should be your face.
No one hears me...
You suffocate me...
And that gift of breath I thought you gave sincerely
Floated away with all the lies you mentioned.
To me...
To her...
To him...
To them...
...To you...

Copyright © Sirena_Degana ... [ 2004-12-24 19:04:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Suffering Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by surge_joebot on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 07:27:17 PM AEST
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very powerful and very well writen

Re: Suffering Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Saturday, 25th December 2004 @ 02:18:16 AM AEST
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wow this is really good well done!!!!!!!

Re: Suffering Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by weezer21 on Friday, 31st December 2004 @ 01:03:55 PM AEST
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HOLY F*ck! that was a GREAT poem...i cant totally relate to it too which makes it even better...i was trying to put this in words and I couldn't do it...you did it so well...great write

-x jessi x-

Re: Suffering Sadness (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 30th September 2005 @ 09:23:09 AM AEST
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amazing, well done

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