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Array ( [sid] => 77104 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Unforgettable [time] => 2004-12-24 06:23:07 [hometext] => no words can explain...just read...please leave comments if any good. ta [bodytext] => As you lay upon me, your sweet smile shone upon my face,
A smile of admiration and love for me,
I didn’t want to leave this holy place,
Leaning down to kiss me, your soft lips became mine
With heartfelt passion we kissed,
As our bodies intertwine,

I began to shake because I felt so scared,
For receiving your love that night,
I was not prepared,
Your hands swept across my body, as our hearts began to race,
I was lost inside your touch,
Mesmerized by your warmth and face,

The tender way you touched me,
I’ve never been touched before,
Your loving hug I couldn’t help but adore,
When you said those loving words, I was captured by you,
Saying I was “gorgeous”,
What an unforgettable thing to do,
We didn’t want to stop and you held me at the door,
Your eyes pierced mine,
Desiring to kiss me more,

These are the moments I can’t get out of my head,
Unwilling to forget as I try and try,
But deep in the recesses of my heart they instead lie,
Gently stoking my face I felt so treasured and glad,
Now remembering your gentle smile,
Only makes me sad,

Was it your kiss…….
Your smile……
Your embrace…….
Or your breathe upon my neck……
That made that one night bliss?
Now only my dreams can tell me this,
For that one night is gone forever, never to be replayed,
I lost my all and beating heart that night,
What a high price I paid.
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Unforgettable

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 06:23:07 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

As you lay upon me, your sweet smile shone upon my face,
A smile of admiration and love for me,
I didn’t want to leave this holy place,
Leaning down to kiss me, your soft lips became mine
With heartfelt passion we kissed,
As our bodies intertwine,

I began to shake because I felt so scared,
For receiving your love that night,
I was not prepared,
Your hands swept across my body, as our hearts began to race,
I was lost inside your touch,
Mesmerized by your warmth and face,

The tender way you touched me,
I’ve never been touched before,
Your loving hug I couldn’t help but adore,
When you said those loving words, I was captured by you,
Saying I was “gorgeous”,
What an unforgettable thing to do,
We didn’t want to stop and you held me at the door,
Your eyes pierced mine,
Desiring to kiss me more,

These are the moments I can’t get out of my head,
Unwilling to forget as I try and try,
But deep in the recesses of my heart they instead lie,
Gently stoking my face I felt so treasured and glad,
Now remembering your gentle smile,
Only makes me sad,

Was it your kiss…….
Your smile……
Your embrace…….
Or your breathe upon my neck……
That made that one night bliss?
Now only my dreams can tell me this,
For that one night is gone forever, never to be replayed,
I lost my all and beating heart that night,
What a high price I paid.

Copyright Â© pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2004-12-24 06:23:07]
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Re: Unforgettable (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 02:18:32 AM AEST
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I didn't want this poem to continue without any comments! lol
This is so beautiful, but sad. I can feel the emotion in every line.
The last stanza is so heartbreaking, but you expressed yourself in an awesome way.
Great job!

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