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Array ( [sid] => 77099 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => White Noise [time] => 2004-12-24 02:58:42 [hometext] => Trapped [bodytext] => Surrounded by noise
Bombarded by static
Emotions are swirling
Frantic erratic.
Think i'm drowning
In a sea of maddening sound
Someone throw me a lifeline
Drag me to some silent ground.
Ceaseless invasion
Constant assault
One million phones ring
I pray for a halt.
One minute of silence
Is all that I need
To be away from the noise
Before my ears bleed.
Count down the hours
This job is my sorrow
Six hours of peace
I do it all again tomorrow. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 257 [topic] => 63 [informant] => outsider [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => hbadday )
White Noise

Contributed by outsider on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 02:58:42 AM in AEST
Topic: hbadday



Surrounded by noise
Bombarded by static
Emotions are swirling
Frantic erratic.
Think i'm drowning
In a sea of maddening sound
Someone throw me a lifeline
Drag me to some silent ground.
Ceaseless invasion
Constant assault
One million phones ring
I pray for a halt.
One minute of silence
Is all that I need
To be away from the noise
Before my ears bleed.
Count down the hours
This job is my sorrow
Six hours of peace
I do it all again tomorrow.




Copyright © outsider ... [ 2004-12-24 02:58:42]
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Re: White Noise (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 06:50:00 AM AEST
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i really liked this..i think i know what youre trying to get across. good write


Re: White Noise (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th January 2005 @ 01:12:52 AM AEST
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Great flow!
I really liked this write.


Re: White Noise (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Friday, 21st January 2005 @ 08:17:13 PM AEST
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Oh yeah! I've had those days! Good poem, I liked it.


Re: White Noise (User Rating: 1 )
by Lovingangel4u on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 04:30:16 AM AEST
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Very vivid write of what you are experiancing. I like the write its very good, but it troubles me that you feel such terrible feelings and yet you continue to keep that job.
ILU


Re: White Noise (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 22nd January 2005 @ 05:51:31 AM AEST
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Wow that was such a nice write, i liked the wya you wrote it. Cool poem.

Jane x




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