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Array ( [sid] => 77064 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Darkness Is Closing In [time] => 2004-12-23 20:00:58 [hometext] => Please Comment [bodytext] => I hide in the corners where noone sees me slice my wrist.
Everyone things im Okay..
But deep down inside things are eating me alive!
The thought of death is the biggest one
The little knife cutting my throat so deep aswell...or just the long jump off
this cliff...
The Darkness is closeing in around me,Sufficating my heart and ways to breath.
Im loseing all site of light.
Im trying to crawl from this corner where I hide where noone see my slice my wirst.
But the Darkness its got me now,Its eating my insides and faith I can provile is lost now.
The Darkness feeds off my empty soul ...
The blade falls from my hand as blood poors from the open hole Darkness made and
The light is now gone,gone away and all thats left is a broken heart and memorys lost in
A dark corner... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 208 [topic] => 36 [informant] => BabyFacedAngel2010 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

The Darkness Is Closing In

Contributed by BabyFacedAngel2010 on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 08:00:58 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I hide in the corners where noone sees me slice my wrist.
Everyone things im Okay..
But deep down inside things are eating me alive!
The thought of death is the biggest one
The little knife cutting my throat so deep aswell...or just the long jump off
this cliff...
The Darkness is closeing in around me,Sufficating my heart and ways to breath.
Im loseing all site of light.
Im trying to crawl from this corner where I hide where noone see my slice my wirst.
But the Darkness its got me now,Its eating my insides and faith I can provile is lost now.
The Darkness feeds off my empty soul ...
The blade falls from my hand as blood poors from the open hole Darkness made and
The light is now gone,gone away and all thats left is a broken heart and memorys lost in
A dark corner...

Copyright © BabyFacedAngel2010 ... [ 2004-12-23 20:00:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: The Darkness Is Closing In (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 08:10:11 PM AEST
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its so sad how no one ever notices whats going on with us or how we feel...until they see whats happened to us on the outside as we slowly begin to die, and they still don't understand....

please comment on my work too
summer

Re: The Darkness Is Closing In (User Rating: 1 )
by lunartune on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 10:46:10 PM AEST
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That's a really good write, sad, but good. I really hope you feel better, and the pain goes away. I've been in your shoes sometimes. Godd write.
LYNN

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