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Array ( [sid] => 76997 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Heart Torn [time] => 2004-12-23 03:06:48 [hometext] => this is my first song i eva wrote so comments/advice much appreciated. it would sound a bit like korn or biohiazard. [bodytext] => White trash, black trash
I dont see teh difference anymore
both the same kind of mind
blood shedin and heart torn

Keep on talken i dont a thing
your mouth is moven but i dont hear anythin.
My minds gone blank
from the screamin of my heart,
ears are bloody ringin
but dont stop the screamin of my heart.

We're all invisible,
just like the howlen wind
seein what we wanna see
neva given in.
Standen up for what we bleieve in,
isnt that our right
but innocence is dyin coz of us
in the middle of the night.

Your liven in the old days
complainen bout the art
but you cant move onto the future
if you cant let go of the past

Keep on talken I dont hear a thing
your mouth is moven but i dont herar anythin.
My minds gone blank
fromthe screamin of my heart
Ears are bloody ringin
but dont stop the screamin of my heart.

I want out
wanna throw it all awa.
Things ive done I cant take back
i know ive got to pay.
i wanna forget about that
and throw it all away,
but you wont let me,
no,you wont let me.

Your holdin onto me
with every mistake I make
so i think its time i break loose
and go my seperate way.
My past is me
i regret what ive become
but as you always say
everythin can come undone.

Keep on talken I dont hear a thing
your mouth is moven but i dont hear anythin
My minds gone blank
from the screamin of my heart
ears are bloody ringing
but dont stop the screamin of my heart.

Things ive done I cant take back
I know ive got to pay.
i wanna forget about that
and throw it all away,
but you wont let me,
no, you wont let me.
but im not listenin anymore.

You hear me!im not listenin anymore! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 34 [informant] => bluebird [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Heart Torn

Contributed by bluebird on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:06:48 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



White trash, black trash
I dont see teh difference anymore
both the same kind of mind
blood shedin and heart torn

Keep on talken i dont a thing
your mouth is moven but i dont hear anythin.
My minds gone blank
from the screamin of my heart,
ears are bloody ringin
but dont stop the screamin of my heart.

We're all invisible,
just like the howlen wind
seein what we wanna see
neva given in.
Standen up for what we bleieve in,
isnt that our right
but innocence is dyin coz of us
in the middle of the night.

Your liven in the old days
complainen bout the art
but you cant move onto the future
if you cant let go of the past

Keep on talken I dont hear a thing
your mouth is moven but i dont herar anythin.
My minds gone blank
fromthe screamin of my heart
Ears are bloody ringin
but dont stop the screamin of my heart.

I want out
wanna throw it all awa.
Things ive done I cant take back
i know ive got to pay.
i wanna forget about that
and throw it all away,
but you wont let me,
no,you wont let me.

Your holdin onto me
with every mistake I make
so i think its time i break loose
and go my seperate way.
My past is me
i regret what ive become
but as you always say
everythin can come undone.

Keep on talken I dont hear a thing
your mouth is moven but i dont hear anythin
My minds gone blank
from the screamin of my heart
ears are bloody ringing
but dont stop the screamin of my heart.

Things ive done I cant take back
I know ive got to pay.
i wanna forget about that
and throw it all away,
but you wont let me,
no, you wont let me.
but im not listenin anymore.

You hear me!im not listenin anymore!




Copyright © bluebird ... [ 2004-12-23 03:06:48]
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Re: Heart Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by Loyalist on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:16:35 AM AEST
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It is good indeed. I wish I could hear it set to music as it would give that much more of an impact. I really liked the line,

"You hear me!im not listenin anymore!"

Very interesting idea using "hear me" versus "I'm not listening". Very kewl! Thank you for reading my opinion.


Re: Heart Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by sick_n_twisted on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:26:19 AM AEST
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Yea real cool poem and i too would wanna hear it in music that'd be awsome


Re: Heart Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 03:28:09 AM AEST
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although im not into your kinda music i think the lyrics raise some intresting points and i especially like the verse "your liven in the old days...."


Re: Heart Torn (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Friday, 24th December 2004 @ 01:59:23 AM AEST
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Great song, I love korn. You did a very good job.




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