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Sand paper voice
It’s hard enough
Making this choice
Cheap cigarettes
Hurting lies
As sad as you look
I have to say good bye
Just please stand back
And let me go
Your love I can’t see
You won’t let it show
If it’s just a disguise
Wipe these tears
From my eyes
I won’t help you stand so
Stop grabbing my hand
You kept me captive
Soul filled with strife
I won’t be troubled no more
If I just end my life
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Troubled Childhood

Contributed by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 08:00:12 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Whiskey breath
Sand paper voice
It’s hard enough
Making this choice
Cheap cigarettes
Hurting lies
As sad as you look
I have to say good bye
Just please stand back
And let me go
Your love I can’t see
You won’t let it show
If it’s just a disguise
Wipe these tears
From my eyes
I won’t help you stand so
Stop grabbing my hand
You kept me captive
Soul filled with strife
I won’t be troubled no more
If I just end my life

Copyright Â© Living_In_My_Dream ... [ 2004-12-22 20:00:12]
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Re: Troubled Childhood (User Rating: 1 )
by greeneyes on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 09:31:42 PM AEST
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Very powerful words.

Nancy

Re: Troubled Childhood (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:26:25 PM AEST
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wow, powerful.. well done

Re: Troubled Childhood (User Rating: 1 )
by TaintedSoul on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:55:28 PM AEST
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Tragic and emotional this write. Nicely done.

peace
TS

Re: Troubled Childhood (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 10:06:29 AM AEST
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a very emotional and powerful write,
pixie xx

Re: Troubled Childhood (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 25th January 2005 @ 04:05:36 AM AEST
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Very sad but written awesomely well.
Hang tuff as joy cometh in the morning.
I pray this is jus writing.
luv, huggs, prayer,
emy

Re: Troubled Childhood (User Rating: 1 )
by rugby_player on Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 10:14:05 PM AEST
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Hey haven't heard from you in awhile i miss talking to you..ok now for the comments.....This was a very powerful write by you...but i did not like the end...but you did do an extremely good job

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