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Array ( [sid] => 7688 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Lief [time] => 2002-11-30 10:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Free ranged animals,
Or deranged cannibals?
It’s survival of the fittest,
Not American or British,
Cause what you think really don’t matter,
You’re only here to make them fatter,
There ain’t a difference when it comes to survival,
There are no rules and everything’s tribal,
Living ain’t free,
Cause death is the fee,
And we’re all past due while still in the womb,
A quick glimpse of light then off to the tomb,
You ain’t here to be you and I ain’t here to be me,
Else we’d be blessed with immortality,
You’re breathin for one reason -
To feed the machine.
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Lief

Contributed by necronomy on Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 10:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Free ranged animals,
Or deranged cannibals?
It’s survival of the fittest,
Not American or British,
Cause what you think really don’t matter,
You’re only here to make them fatter,
There ain’t a difference when it comes to survival,
There are no rules and everything’s tribal,
Living ain’t free,
Cause death is the fee,
And we’re all past due while still in the womb,
A quick glimpse of light then off to the tomb,
You ain’t here to be you and I ain’t here to be me,
Else we’d be blessed with immortality,
You’re breathin for one reason -
To feed the machine.

Copyright Â© necronomy ... [ 2002-11-30 10:30:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Lief (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 02:40:35 PM AEST
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Beautiful....this is the one i been
waiting to read a second time. Your
talent shines through your poetry.
I started to say which lines were my
favorite but as i kept reading the next
line then the next line it just went on
and i kept saying no i like this one
no this one is my favorite line
no this next one is....The whole poem
is beautiful. Thanks for sharing this one
It's beautiful. Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.

Re: Lief (User Rating: 1 )
by RealCrystal on Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 04:14:19 PM AEST
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The way you present your thougts interests me, and this poem shows your beleifs in many different versions

Re: Lief (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 11:23:43 PM AEST
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This is beautiful. Really, Truly Beautiful. It shows the world, in a light that I have tried, but couldn't put into words. Thanks for sharing this. I really like it.

YS

Re: Lief (User Rating: 1 )
by Sarah22 on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 01:27:56 AM AEST
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lovely work :*)

Re: Lief (User Rating: 1 )
by Roshie on Wednesday, 18th December 2002 @ 08:01:54 PM AEST
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This is a really great write, you have talant thats for sure! =)

Re: Lief (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 09:31:21 PM AEST
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Words woven in truth and spread with fire.
A very nice read.

wordsy.

Re: Lief (User Rating: 1 )
by Alexander_McDonald on Monday, 23rd December 2002 @ 01:08:48 AM AEST
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I liked it. It had a machine like tempo... But, why did you call it Lief?

Re: Lief (User Rating: 1 )
by Necronomy on Sunday, 5th January 2003 @ 09:49:16 PM AEST
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lief = life, except spelled for what it really is, a lie(f)

Re: Lief (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Wednesday, 26th February 2003 @ 01:48:12 AM AEST
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interesting concept....i like this one...leaves me thinking.
kara

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