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Array ( [sid] => 76878 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Without You [time] => 2004-12-22 12:35:32 [hometext] => I'm not sure if I like it yet... [bodytext] => I thought things would get better if I just let go
But my world came to an end
And I got nothin' left to show
All I need is a friend
Why did I do this, how could I?
I can't handle this anymore
And the hardest part is goodbye
Now I am so unsure
I don't know what I can do
How to stop the pain
This is hard, I feel it too
But only God can stop the rain
Only He can make the choice
And I don't know what it will be
Just listen for the voice
Close your eyes, and you will see
I don't know if this is goodbye
And I don't know if I'm ok
I'm doing my best not to cry
This is the only way [comments] => 3 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 52 [informant] => LilGnefkow [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Without You

Contributed by LilGnefkow on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 12:35:32 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I thought things would get better if I just let go
But my world came to an end
And I got nothin' left to show
All I need is a friend
Why did I do this, how could I?
I can't handle this anymore
And the hardest part is goodbye
Now I am so unsure
I don't know what I can do
How to stop the pain
This is hard, I feel it too
But only God can stop the rain
Only He can make the choice
And I don't know what it will be
Just listen for the voice
Close your eyes, and you will see
I don't know if this is goodbye
And I don't know if I'm ok
I'm doing my best not to cry
This is the only way

Copyright © LilGnefkow ... [ 2004-12-22 12:35:32]
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Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 12:36:35 PM AEST
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a very sad farewell poem, greatly expressed
pixie xx

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by supergirlblibs on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 01:01:42 PM AEST
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Its good! i can kinda relate to it at the moment too! keep it up x

Re: Without You (User Rating: 1 )
by GodisGreat3842 on Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 02:31:40 PM AEST
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Hey hun, that's really good! I'm proud of you, stay strong.

-Em

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