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my own war
Contributed by
ballistik
on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 06:55:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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whisper my name...solace...never known such peace....silence....the werdz are echoing fer hourz....nothing in return...im emotionless stuck on imagez....nobodyz concern....im a loner taught strugglez....fight fer myself....never let go of the ball...i fight fer my own health...listening ta battered cryz...ther so tainted...so scarred...i cant see the rainbow...im to messed up ...to tired....the wayz i wanna be...ther lost never ta be seen....they throw shoutz of tenderness at me...but im to abandoned ta come out....i wanna hear my name shouted high over the towerz...nobody can hold my soul....itz been to tortured fer hourz....ive seen the rainz fall down...ive seen the ppl cry...ive only known lonesomeness...ive been betrayed to long....now im black hearted and selfish...theyll never bring me back...they try so hard but cant claim me....to many timez theyve attacked...attached to ther learning wheel...i dont wanna be taught like them...ill do it my damn self man....im to strong fer you ta defend...im on a higher level...my shacklez have been broken no more....so lemme jus go....and finish my own war....
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Re: my own war
(User Rating: 1 ) by tractorbabe on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 10:13:36 AM AEST (User
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great flow of words ..its more like a story though than a poem ..just because of the way its set up...but its really good...great poetry |
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