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[title] => Older Sister
[time] => 2004-12-21 19:26:01
[hometext] => Please critique, I am planning on giving this to my Sister for Christmas. I want to give her the best, so any advice would help.
[bodytext] => I have a wonderful sister My very best friend Though she is very far away Miles and miles Across the ocean and more But even through the distance I’m with her everyday The wind echoes her voice The sun’s rays are her touch Her smile is in shown in the stars The moon is her guidance in the dark The ocean is her lullaby Her tears are every drop of rain The fire is her eyes Every wilting flower mimics her pain Her love is my guardian angel We’ve had to put up with Things only some can imagine When stuff were said and done Tears were cried And feelings were hurt But we helped each other through Even though we are not together I will keep her in my heart So if she does the same We will never be apart And hopefully someday soon We won’t be so far apart I won’t have to look at some picture I can see her for myself My loving older sister [comments] => 4 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 16 [informant] => EverlastingDawn [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
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