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Array ( [sid] => 76789 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Another Love-Another Place [time] => 2004-12-21 18:43:19 [hometext] => For thoes who ask I remain...My thanks and respect to each of you... [bodytext] =>
Beneath the moon that now wears no smile-
You stop to ponder for just a short while-
And to the stars above you bear your soul-
Asking why love lingers not and had to go…

Searching about within your uncertain mind-
No explanations are you able to find-
And nary a reason for the ache that you feel-
Yet here you are standing alone, the pain is real…

Upon the winds are carried your words of fear-
The future for you now seems so unclear-
And your tears are now cast upon a great lake-
As your past you find you must forsake…

Softly spoken are your words of remorse-
For the past now gone is no longer tomorrows coarse-
And your heart once filled with loves bright light-
Like the robin in the winter, has taken flight…

Your clothes are now stained in warm red-
And visions no longer mingle about within your head-
For your own life you have just now taken-
All because of your love that was forsaken…

Open your eyes now and look all around-
A new love your heart has now found-
And you did not chance to see deaths face-
It was only a dream of another love and another place…


(12-21-2004)
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Another Love-Another Place

Contributed by hoist1atca on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:43:19 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry




Beneath the moon that now wears no smile-
You stop to ponder for just a short while-
And to the stars above you bear your soul-
Asking why love lingers not and had to go…

Searching about within your uncertain mind-
No explanations are you able to find-
And nary a reason for the ache that you feel-
Yet here you are standing alone, the pain is real…

Upon the winds are carried your words of fear-
The future for you now seems so unclear-
And your tears are now cast upon a great lake-
As your past you find you must forsake…

Softly spoken are your words of remorse-
For the past now gone is no longer tomorrows coarse-
And your heart once filled with loves bright light-
Like the robin in the winter, has taken flight…

Your clothes are now stained in warm red-
And visions no longer mingle about within your head-
For your own life you have just now taken-
All because of your love that was forsaken…

Open your eyes now and look all around-
A new love your heart has now found-
And you did not chance to see deaths face-
It was only a dream of another love and another place…


(12-21-2004)




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Re: Another Love-Another Place (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:25:54 PM AEST
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First, a beauriful piece of work..lovely images filled my head. 2nd..Thanks for staying..you brace up a weary soul and a verry, verry tired heart. A :-*)


Re: Another Love-Another Place (User Rating: 1 )
by LevyMetal on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 08:12:29 PM AEST
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Poetical. Well written.


Re: Another Love-Another Place (User Rating: 1 )
by blossomingcherry5353 on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 10:00:26 PM AEST
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Wow, very strong and beautiful poem. I know It brought tears to my eyes keep up the good work.
shannon


Re: Another Love-Another Place (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 06:49:49 AM AEST
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I am so glad that you stayed :) if not we would have missed this beautiful and wonderful poem,
pixie xx


Re: Another Love-Another Place (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 28th December 2004 @ 01:47:41 AM AEST
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Absolutely gorgeous poem. Thank you sharing. :-)


Re: Another Love-Another Place (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Saturday, 1st January 2005 @ 11:23:44 AM AEST
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Oh, this is fabulous!!
I am so glad you stayed too. It would have been such a shame to lose such a fine poet.

Always keep writing.
Much love,
Phil xxx




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