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Array ( [sid] => 76782 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Suicide My Soul [time] => 2004-12-21 17:30:43 [hometext] => hey.. this poem wont be good im only 12. I wrote it about how i feel about my ex i tried 2 commit suicide then as my wrists started bleedin i thhought what am i thinking? so.. tell me what u think! [bodytext] => Broken Up Forever, Pouring You Into My Hands,
Knowing That Its Over But My Love It Still Expands,
Blood And Tears Around Me, I Open My Eyes But Darkness Is All I See,
Is This My Fate? To Be Alone Forever? Or Die At An Instant?
As Light Is Beaten By Dark, The Devil Takes A Hold Of My Life,
So I Quickly Take My Wrist And I'll Slowly Slit It With A Knife,
As Tears Run Down My Cheeks And Blood Falls Fast Off My Finger Tips,
Shattered And Dying, Murdered And Crying,As I Lie Dreaming Of Kissing Your Soft Lips,
I Try 2 Breath Although The Slit Makes It Hard,
Thinking About You, Your Love Has Left Me Here Scared,
Perhaps Im Not Meant To Fall For You Right Yet,
But Now Its To Late To Take It Back, My Time For Death Is Now Perfectly Set,
I Slit My Wrists, Cried Blood For You And That Still Just Got Me Nowhere,
Never Again Will We Be, I Wasted My Life On You, Just Wanted You To Care,
I Wanna Take It Back, Now Its Over And My Life Is What The Devil Stole,
Ill Never Get You Back Now, As I Suicide My Soul. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 287 [topic] => 36 [informant] => heartbroken_chick [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 23 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Suicide My Soul

Contributed by heartbroken_chick on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 05:30:43 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Broken Up Forever, Pouring You Into My Hands,
Knowing That Its Over But My Love It Still Expands,
Blood And Tears Around Me, I Open My Eyes But Darkness Is All I See,
Is This My Fate? To Be Alone Forever? Or Die At An Instant?
As Light Is Beaten By Dark, The Devil Takes A Hold Of My Life,
So I Quickly Take My Wrist And I'll Slowly Slit It With A Knife,
As Tears Run Down My Cheeks And Blood Falls Fast Off My Finger Tips,
Shattered And Dying, Murdered And Crying,As I Lie Dreaming Of Kissing Your Soft Lips,
I Try 2 Breath Although The Slit Makes It Hard,
Thinking About You, Your Love Has Left Me Here Scared,
Perhaps Im Not Meant To Fall For You Right Yet,
But Now Its To Late To Take It Back, My Time For Death Is Now Perfectly Set,
I Slit My Wrists, Cried Blood For You And That Still Just Got Me Nowhere,
Never Again Will We Be, I Wasted My Life On You, Just Wanted You To Care,
I Wanna Take It Back, Now Its Over And My Life Is What The Devil Stole,
Ill Never Get You Back Now, As I Suicide My Soul.

Copyright © heartbroken_chick ... [ 2004-12-21 17:30:43]
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Re: Suicide My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by LevyMetal on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 05:48:59 PM AEST
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Hey, i love the way you use your words. You have amazing potential, would love to see more work from you.

Re: Suicide My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:37:19 PM AEST
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I think 12 years old is the time to be thinking about school and grades and ... not suicide and love and that crud...but the idea is great..knowing that once something is done it's too late to take it back..good job.

Re: Suicide My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 08:03:37 PM AEST
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I hope you are okay. There is a person out there just for you, so don't worry. Suicide is not the answer, God is the answer. I have tried to commit suicide 3 times and God saved me. I then realized suicide isn't the answer. If you ever need to talk just PM me. Other than the suicide part great write.

Re: Suicide My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 09:59:00 PM AEST
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Good poem, but i want to say that you are too young to be in love, you have your whole life ahead of you. I would give anything to be 12 again. I am in my late 20s and i have a hard time just trying to figure out what i want out of life and i get hurt all the time by guys. Take this time to have fun in life and concentrate on school and the guys will come later on in life. You have so much to look forward to in life, and you have your teen years, they will go by fast soon before you know it. I wasted my teen years on a guy i thought i loved, and i cant get them years back that i lost. Life is too short to be hurting over a guy, even to take your life over too.

Re: Suicide My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 06:43:15 AM AEST
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Are you sure you're only twelve?? So much potential in one so young!! This is life. We love, we break up, we hurt, we learn, and we move on. Don't be afraid to live. The pain of lost love fades away (even though we don't think it EVER will) and then one day we find that one and only person who makes us incredibly happy. It can happen! :o) I look forward to reading more of your writes and I am going to tell my granchildren to check out your stuff. They'll really like this. Peace to you.
Thumps ; 0)

Re: Suicide My Soul (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 06:48:13 AM AEST
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Oh, and welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com. This is a great place to be!
Thumps ; 0)

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