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Array ( [sid] => 76730 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Fall [time] => 2004-12-21 09:47:05 [hometext] => This was an assignment for my english101 course [bodytext] => Do not succumb to all of their lies.
Those who lay down,
And let the pain take over will never find…
The beauty within the fall,
Forever they stand still…
Dying in it all,
Unable to see past their scars,
Living a life so hallow,
Destined to remain where they are…
The words said so long ago.
Do not matter now…
As they sit alone.
Living in the past…
They will never know
The beauty within the fall
Forever they stand still
Dying in it all…
Watching you live everyday as if it were your last
When it’s all over
I know you’ll have the last laugh.
Never having wasted your life
Dwelling on the pain
Of time spent searching for better days.
Though you stumbled,
And came Face to face with,
The beauty in the fall
Not about to stand still
Or be consumed by it all.
From the depths of sorrow and back again,
You must experience it all,
To find your way,
Sometimes you must fall.

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Cutieindahurley [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Fall

Contributed by Cutieindahurley on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 09:47:05 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Do not succumb to all of their lies.
Those who lay down,
And let the pain take over will never find…
The beauty within the fall,
Forever they stand still…
Dying in it all,
Unable to see past their scars,
Living a life so hallow,
Destined to remain where they are…
The words said so long ago.
Do not matter now…
As they sit alone.
Living in the past…
They will never know
The beauty within the fall
Forever they stand still
Dying in it all…
Watching you live everyday as if it were your last
When it’s all over
I know you’ll have the last laugh.
Never having wasted your life
Dwelling on the pain
Of time spent searching for better days.
Though you stumbled,
And came Face to face with,
The beauty in the fall
Not about to stand still
Or be consumed by it all.
From the depths of sorrow and back again,
You must experience it all,
To find your way,
Sometimes you must fall.

Copyright Â© Cutieindahurley ... [ 2004-12-21 09:47:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 09:51:27 AM AEST
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beautiful x

Re: Fall (User Rating: 1 )
by DanishPoet on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 10:03:02 AM AEST
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Well written. Even though I didn't like it, still, somehow, it made me keep reading... wierd.

Toke

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