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Its not fair to me nor do others deserve it.
I really think it is time to say goodbye,
I know I say it a lot and not yet have you seen me die.
I was always serious but certain ppl had the power to stop me,
but this time it is different nobody holding me back so im set free.
There are still ppl there who care and try to make me stay,
but they dont deserve the pain i give them everyday.
If i am hurting you by this i am sorry but soon the pain will end,
you will move on and make more friends.
The pain will subside with time,
and once agin the sun for you will shine.
Just move on and understand my decision,
when i lay there look into my eyes and see this vision.
Trust me being here wont make you happier then if left,
your happiness will come down to one thing; my death.
Just realize these words that I speak,
you may call me names and tell me that I am weak.
But that is okay
I already know it, there is nothing else for you to say.
Sorry if this comes as a strong blow,
so say goodbye,as now its time for me to go.
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goodbye

Contributed by bluebird on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:56:35 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The pain i have and the pain I give off isnt worth it,
Its not fair to me nor do others deserve it.
I really think it is time to say goodbye,
I know I say it a lot and not yet have you seen me die.
I was always serious but certain ppl had the power to stop me,
but this time it is different nobody holding me back so im set free.
There are still ppl there who care and try to make me stay,
but they dont deserve the pain i give them everyday.
If i am hurting you by this i am sorry but soon the pain will end,
you will move on and make more friends.
The pain will subside with time,
and once agin the sun for you will shine.
Just move on and understand my decision,
when i lay there look into my eyes and see this vision.
Trust me being here wont make you happier then if left,
your happiness will come down to one thing; my death.
Just realize these words that I speak,
you may call me names and tell me that I am weak.
But that is okay
I already know it, there is nothing else for you to say.
Sorry if this comes as a strong blow,
so say goodbye,as now its time for me to go.

Copyright © bluebird ... [ 2004-12-21 06:56:35]
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Re: goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:58:36 AM AEST
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very emotional and deep, a sad write, sorry you feel this way
pixie xx

Re: goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:06:50 AM AEST
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i know these feelings too well! especially where you put...
"There are still ppl there who care and try to make me stay,
but they dont deserve the pain i give them everyday".
it makes all the sense....
and it wasn't long ago that i felt like this my-self... infact, it's only a matter of weeks...
try to hang on... it could be worth it in the end.
life will ALWAYS have problems in it but what will it make you if you turn and run from it instead of walking up to it and facing it...
think about it...

Re: goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Scarlett on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:27:37 AM AEST
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good write, made a deep impact on me. i know how it feels to think this way and i never thought it would end but it did and i am happier now than i've ever been. my circumstances didn't even change, just my state of mind. when you get to the bottom, the only way is up!

take care

scarlett

Re: goodbye (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 11:28:56 PM AEST
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This poem is very sad. I like it a lot though because I've felt this way many times before, so I can relate to your pain.

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