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[aid] => mick
[title] => Hopeless Romantic-Romantically Hopeless
[time] => 2004-12-21 03:18:08
[hometext] => I think I am coming out of my funk. this ones better than what i have written lately.
[bodytext] => Watching the letters and numbers,
Mingle, mix and finally settle.
The enigma machine of romance,
Chivalry rusts on the keys,
A blade no longer needed.
Love doesn't come like it should.
Glittering in a velvet box on an empty ring.
Instead it rests upon the ribbon,
Waiting for resusitation.
To be revived into a perfect blossom,
Of confidence and hope.
Inspiring and challenging,
Like the old gloves over the nail.
Collecting dust and residue,
Where are the fighters, the lovers, the heroes of our age?
When piercing the heart, romance was fatal.
Cutting into the agenda, replacing it with desire.
The blood staining every part,
Until all you knew was the other.
So now love rests,
Waiting for the time it will inspire.
Waiting to cut into my heart and revive me,
Until I am stained with love;
And passion overrides all other sense.
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[counter] => 338
[topic] => 2
[informant] => deadreckoning1983
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[alanguage] => english
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[score] => 20
[ratings] => 4
[editpoem] => 1
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Hopeless Romantic-Romantically Hopeless
Contributed by
deadreckoning1983
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 03:18:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Watching the letters and numbers,
Mingle, mix and finally settle.
The enigma machine of romance,
Chivalry rusts on the keys,
A blade no longer needed.
Love doesn't come like it should.
Glittering in a velvet box on an empty ring.
Instead it rests upon the ribbon,
Waiting for resusitation.
To be revived into a perfect blossom,
Of confidence and hope.
Inspiring and challenging,
Like the old gloves over the nail.
Collecting dust and residue,
Where are the fighters, the lovers, the heroes of our age?
When piercing the heart, romance was fatal.
Cutting into the agenda, replacing it with desire.
The blood staining every part,
Until all you knew was the other.
So now love rests,
Waiting for the time it will inspire.
Waiting to cut into my heart and revive me,
Until I am stained with love;
And passion overrides all other sense.
Copyright ©
deadreckoning1983
... [
2004-12-21 03:18:08]
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Re: Hopeless Romantic-Romantically Hopeless
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by musicisluv7 on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 05:53:04 AM AEST
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tht was an absolutely wonderful poem!
much luv xx |
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by pixie on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:28:51 AM AEST
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that was lovely, really lovel;y,
pixie xx |
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:05:29 AM AEST
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Ohh my well isint this something, this is just beautiful. I love the way you composed this piece this is really one hell of a poem.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 07:05:30 AM AEST
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Ohh my well isint this something, this is just beautiful. I love the way you composed this piece this is really one hell of a poem.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Hopeless Romantic-Romantically Hopeless
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by eyesxcriedxout1989 on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 11:49:37 AM AEST
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Listen to Jane on this one...this is definitly (in my opinion) your best...this was like a great movie I was still tortured to watch, this held so much meaning for me on so many different levels...Truly a wonderful write here Dane, you are the greatest poet of our time...I bow to you
Mason |
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by emocutie07 on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 05:57:29 PM AEST
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| This was utterly ahmazing...I was hooked on your every word, beautiful write...now Im off to read some more of your work |
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Re: Hopeless Romantic-Romantically Hopeless
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by EverlastingDawn on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:34:03 PM AEST
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| It's a really good poem. Using such amazing imagery. Good write |
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Re: Hopeless Romantic-Romantically Hopeless
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 06:38:58 PM AEST
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I know I like all your poems,
but look,
this is why.
I will have to catch up with all your
recent poems,
and certainly am excited about it.
--G Moth |
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Re: Hopeless Romantic-Romantically Hopeless
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by Nazmythian on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 02:40:51 PM AEST
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Every once in a while words stun me ... leave me speachless ... yours just did.
Nazzy ~ |
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Re: Hopeless Romantic-Romantically Hopeless
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by katyqueen35 on
Wednesday, 22nd December 2004 @ 11:39:21 PM AEST
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Wow Dane how romantic and beautiful.
You express this poem very well. |
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 12:49:46 AM AEST
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Wow this is a very powerfull write.
huggs, luv, smiles,
emy |
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Re: Hopeless Romantic-Romantically Hopeless
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by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 1st November 2014 @ 03:56:52 PM AEST
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Excellent! So many lines I wish I could take credit for...I love the bold imagery through words that captivated this reader.
The title, everything, just fits. You have a new fan in me.
~Scorp |
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