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hell

Contributed by ballistik on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 03:05:22 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



you try ta make me feel so down....the werdz attacking my body im obsessed i frown....i look at the dayz when you said you cared...it bleedz inside my eyez im dead im scared....the way you taunt me it hurtz me i fear....the way you look at me i cant understand you glare....you put yer handz on me you said i stared....the look it hauntz me itz in my thoughtz itz there....you wanted ta torture me you wanted me ta be aware...you jus scold me and burn me itz terrible itz not fair....why is it me? i dont care itz blurry....you said such harsh thingz you talk i worry....i wanna make up fer it i pleed im sorry....you resist my effortz i try so hardly...so ***** it all im not werth it im nothing....you jus want me ta do it? i look fer something....itz not there you bash me im wanting....my eyez have gone blank the demonz ther taunting....the violence itz hurting i close my earz therz silence....the demonz stop talking ther deadly and more violant....the death has come what now? im the tyrant....i cant see the imagez ther white whyz that....nothing is right i cant stand it i give up....you wanted it this way...jus remember im not comin back............




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