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From the heart I can't believe,
In broken minds and livid souls.
The touch I know I can't retreive.

Counting stars and tasting loss,
For stopping time, my final cost.
But I believe I lost control.
And here I lay upon the cross.

A bitter smile with cracking lip,
An autumn's fall my coldest trip,
And spinning in this twylight haze,
With dizziness I lost my grip.

Sometimes I refuse to breathe
No matter what I can't believe,
That awake is something more than this.
And in the darkness is my dream.

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Dizzy

Contributed by ecly on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:40:32 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Sometimes I refuse to breathe,
From the heart I can't believe,
In broken minds and livid souls.
The touch I know I can't retreive.

Counting stars and tasting loss,
For stopping time, my final cost.
But I believe I lost control.
And here I lay upon the cross.

A bitter smile with cracking lip,
An autumn's fall my coldest trip,
And spinning in this twylight haze,
With dizziness I lost my grip.

Sometimes I refuse to breathe
No matter what I can't believe,
That awake is something more than this.
And in the darkness is my dream.

Copyright © ecly ... [ 2004-12-21 01:40:32]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Dizzy (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:45:24 AM AEST
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Great write.

A bitter smile with craking lip....With Dizziness I lost my grip.

Need I say more?

Re: Dizzy (User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:57:08 AM AEST
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this is a piece i can relate it to so many things in life.
~keep the faith~
BB

Re: Dizzy (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 02:33:55 AM AEST
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I love the first stanza the best, it reflects what im feeling sometimes. This is such a good write 5/5.

Hugs,
Jane x

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