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Array ( [sid] => 7669 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I love you daddy [time] => 2002-11-30 01:00:00 [hometext] => this is completely fictous [bodytext] => Mommy's Sick
Daddy's with her
Ther little sits alone wishing for her parents

she needs attenton too
she cries

she decides to be sck too
she doesn't eat
loses wieght fast

she does get sick
she has a heart attack
too many sit ups not enough food

she is in the same hospital as her mother
her daddy sits by her bed now
she is in a coma though

He fears she doesnt know he is there

One day while sitting in the hospital cafeteria
He sees a young girl crying
He goes up to her and asks whats wrong

She says I miss my parents
They are going to leave me here

He says ," No they wont , they love you "
She reminds him of his daughter
He tells her

His wife has cancer
His daughter has anorexia
Both are here
He even cries

She hugs him close and says , " I love you Daddy"
He looks down and she is gone

Then some nurses come runnng and tell him to hurry his daughter is waking up

He sees her and knows that girl was his angel
she was his daughter

He is greatful for her being alive
She is happy to be with him
Then He says to her what she wanted to hear
"I love you Theresa" [comments] => 2 [counter] => 285 [topic] => 23 [informant] => KraZshyt [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FamilyPoems )
I love you daddy

Contributed by KraZshyt on Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 01:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: FamilyPoems



Mommy's Sick
Daddy's with her
Ther little sits alone wishing for her parents

she needs attenton too
she cries

she decides to be sck too
she doesn't eat
loses wieght fast

she does get sick
she has a heart attack
too many sit ups not enough food

she is in the same hospital as her mother
her daddy sits by her bed now
she is in a coma though

He fears she doesnt know he is there

One day while sitting in the hospital cafeteria
He sees a young girl crying
He goes up to her and asks whats wrong

She says I miss my parents
They are going to leave me here

He says ," No they wont , they love you "
She reminds him of his daughter
He tells her

His wife has cancer
His daughter has anorexia
Both are here
He even cries

She hugs him close and says , " I love you Daddy"
He looks down and she is gone

Then some nurses come runnng and tell him to hurry his daughter is waking up

He sees her and knows that girl was his angel
she was his daughter

He is greatful for her being alive
She is happy to be with him
Then He says to her what she wanted to hear
"I love you Theresa"




Copyright © KraZshyt ... [ 2002-11-30 01:00:00]
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Re: I love you daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 02:51:36 AM AEST
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Fictious or not it's beautiful.
Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: I love you daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by chantel on Wednesday, 8th January 2003 @ 02:49:56 PM AEST
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i got goose bumps i love this one i also suffored from belimia and i was touched by this. becouse it holds truth i was that way for attention. good job
chantel




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