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[aid] => mick
[title] => Looking for You in your Words (Kissing Your Broken Skin)
[time] => 2004-12-21 00:00:22
[hometext] => this is my Looking For An Angel poem re written with two bonus poems I really worked hard on these to get them as perfect as i could
[bodytext] => There is nothing more beautiful
Than what I have seen
Looking into your words
Trying to find you in them
And then I do
As if looking into the eyes
Of an angel with a soul
I look inside you
I sink into your eyes
They have this allure
This beauty that is so pure
They make me think of sin
Your eyes they draw me in
Draw me and make it so
That I don’t want them to let me go
From their sweet embrace
I want them to leave their trace
Leave their markings on my skin
Those marks resonate from the light within
Of these eyes of this soul I want to be the keeper
I want them to draw me in deeper
To where there is no escape
I need to be there that is no mistake
I want you to know the truth
I want to be there with you
Kissing your broken skin
As if to mend the scars you have within
I want to dress you in my arms
And protect you from all harm
I need you to open your self up to me
Not now not soon just when ever you feel ready
There is nothing more beautiful
Than what I have seen
Looking into your words
Trying to find you in them
And then I do
I find you my angel and I will not let you go
You are so beautiful to me can’t you see that is so
I want to be apart of your life this you have to know
I want to be bound to you soul to soul
I am overwhelmed by what you are by everything that makes you whole
I wish that I could be there for you
To help you go through all you could go through
To be there for you through all you pain
To chase away your fear out into the pouring rain
I want to dress you in my arms so that you could feel
The way you make my heart race in a way so surreal
To hold you in my arms would be greater than any dream
To be there to kiss you shut you up when you want to scream
To be there by your side and make your spirits sore
You’re making my heart crash like wave breaking on the shore
I know now that this is what I am meant for
There is nothing more beautiful
Than what I find you to be
I imagine your silhouette dancing with me
And I imagine caressing your shape and form
And holding you in my arms so that you would not feel torn
I want to kiss you and show you how I feel
I want to show you that what we can have is real
I want you to know that I am here and am not a dream
That will fade away when you open your eyes and tears start to stream
I see something in your that you makes me feel clean
I see how you really are I can see your wings
I want to be bound to you soul to soul
I am overwhelmed by what you are by everything that makes you whole
I wish that I could be there for you
To help you go through all you could go through
To be there for you through all you pain
To chase away your fear out into the pouring rain
I want to dress you in my arms so that you could feel
The way you make my heart race in a way so surreal
To hold you in my arms would be greater than any dream
To be there to kiss you shut you up when you want to scream
To be there by your side and make your spirits sore
You’re making my heart crash like wave breaking on the shore
I know now that this is what I am meant for
Perfect To Me
Her face is so beautiful
Her large eyes captivate me
And her mouth when she speaks or smiles
Just traps me in a gaze
One I can not get free from
And it has me longing for a kiss
Her kisses can kill I am sure of it
The most perfect form of bliss
I love it when she gets shy
And covers her face with her hair
I love everything about her
I want to be there with her in the dark
Two silhouette dancing then joining
In the sweetest of embrace
Then disappearing under satin covers
Swimming in pools of lust in her bed
She amazes me and I am forever overwhelmed by her
I am her broken stranger and she is mine
I feel something for her I cannot explain
Something I cannot deny
It fills my heart and erupts in my chest
I lose my mind but cannot protest
She is an angel to me
But she cannot see her wings
The only she calls hers is not worthy of her
And he will never be that is why I am not filled with jealousy
She is an angel to me
Her wings wrap around me and I am in a trance
I have died already from what I feel
And have been reborn by what is in her heart
Her tears are precious to me
She is angel to me
And she is more than my world will ever need
We are forever broken you and I
We are forever broken you and I
Searching for the true reasons why we cry
I feel for you a bit more
When I saw your tears fall almost like words
Where they fell on me my skin tore
Your tears cry out in mourning and by me are herd
I want to press my face against yours and steal those tears
And take along with them all your fears
So that you will not be afraid to trust me
To open yourself up
And to let your feelings free
And see that we have the same cuts
We are forever broken you and I
Searching for the true reasons why we cry
Both of us are always looking for the fall
Needing something to replace the blade
Wanting a love that is worth risking it all
Both of us no how easily love can fade
I want to press my face against yours and steal those tears
And take along with them all your fears
Replace them with the feeling of being wanted
Give you my whole heart and soul
So you would never be alone and by me be haunted
So even if we are miles away you will still feel whole
We are forever broken you and I
Searching for the true reasons why we cry
I know I have seen you I know now it was in my dreams
I know that us meeting was more than chance or destiny
I saw you wanting to drown yourself in the over flowing stream
You heard me calling for you and I heard you calling for me
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Looking for You in your Words (Kissing Your Broken Skin)
Contributed by
Doriens_Picture
on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:00:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
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There is nothing more beautiful
Than what I have seen
Looking into your words
Trying to find you in them
And then I do
As if looking into the eyes
Of an angel with a soul
I look inside you
I sink into your eyes
They have this allure
This beauty that is so pure
They make me think of sin
Your eyes they draw me in
Draw me and make it so
That I don’t want them to let me go
From their sweet embrace
I want them to leave their trace
Leave their markings on my skin
Those marks resonate from the light within
Of these eyes of this soul I want to be the keeper
I want them to draw me in deeper
To where there is no escape
I need to be there that is no mistake
I want you to know the truth
I want to be there with you
Kissing your broken skin
As if to mend the scars you have within
I want to dress you in my arms
And protect you from all harm
I need you to open your self up to me
Not now not soon just when ever you feel ready
There is nothing more beautiful
Than what I have seen
Looking into your words
Trying to find you in them
And then I do
I find you my angel and I will not let you go
You are so beautiful to me can’t you see that is so
I want to be apart of your life this you have to know
I want to be bound to you soul to soul
I am overwhelmed by what you are by everything that makes you whole
I wish that I could be there for you
To help you go through all you could go through
To be there for you through all you pain
To chase away your fear out into the pouring rain
I want to dress you in my arms so that you could feel
The way you make my heart race in a way so surreal
To hold you in my arms would be greater than any dream
To be there to kiss you shut you up when you want to scream
To be there by your side and make your spirits sore
You’re making my heart crash like wave breaking on the shore
I know now that this is what I am meant for
There is nothing more beautiful
Than what I find you to be
I imagine your silhouette dancing with me
And I imagine caressing your shape and form
And holding you in my arms so that you would not feel torn
I want to kiss you and show you how I feel
I want to show you that what we can have is real
I want you to know that I am here and am not a dream
That will fade away when you open your eyes and tears start to stream
I see something in your that you makes me feel clean
I see how you really are I can see your wings
I want to be bound to you soul to soul
I am overwhelmed by what you are by everything that makes you whole
I wish that I could be there for you
To help you go through all you could go through
To be there for you through all you pain
To chase away your fear out into the pouring rain
I want to dress you in my arms so that you could feel
The way you make my heart race in a way so surreal
To hold you in my arms would be greater than any dream
To be there to kiss you shut you up when you want to scream
To be there by your side and make your spirits sore
You’re making my heart crash like wave breaking on the shore
I know now that this is what I am meant for
Perfect To Me
Her face is so beautiful
Her large eyes captivate me
And her mouth when she speaks or smiles
Just traps me in a gaze
One I can not get free from
And it has me longing for a kiss
Her kisses can kill I am sure of it
The most perfect form of bliss
I love it when she gets shy
And covers her face with her hair
I love everything about her
I want to be there with her in the dark
Two silhouette dancing then joining
In the sweetest of embrace
Then disappearing under satin covers
Swimming in pools of lust in her bed
She amazes me and I am forever overwhelmed by her
I am her broken stranger and she is mine
I feel something for her I cannot explain
Something I cannot deny
It fills my heart and erupts in my chest
I lose my mind but cannot protest
She is an angel to me
But she cannot see her wings
The only she calls hers is not worthy of her
And he will never be that is why I am not filled with jealousy
She is an angel to me
Her wings wrap around me and I am in a trance
I have died already from what I feel
And have been reborn by what is in her heart
Her tears are precious to me
She is angel to me
And she is more than my world will ever need
We are forever broken you and I
We are forever broken you and I
Searching for the true reasons why we cry
I feel for you a bit more
When I saw your tears fall almost like words
Where they fell on me my skin tore
Your tears cry out in mourning and by me are herd
I want to press my face against yours and steal those tears
And take along with them all your fears
So that you will not be afraid to trust me
To open yourself up
And to let your feelings free
And see that we have the same cuts
We are forever broken you and I
Searching for the true reasons why we cry
Both of us are always looking for the fall
Needing something to replace the blade
Wanting a love that is worth risking it all
Both of us no how easily love can fade
I want to press my face against yours and steal those tears
And take along with them all your fears
Replace them with the feeling of being wanted
Give you my whole heart and soul
So you would never be alone and by me be haunted
So even if we are miles away you will still feel whole
We are forever broken you and I
Searching for the true reasons why we cry
I know I have seen you I know now it was in my dreams
I know that us meeting was more than chance or destiny
I saw you wanting to drown yourself in the over flowing stream
You heard me calling for you and I heard you calling for me
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Re: Looking for You in your Words (Kissing Your Broken Skin)
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by katyqueen35 on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:08:21 AM AEST
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Wow what a beautiful and well expose poem.
I am empress.great job. |
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Re: Looking for You in your Words (Kissing Your Broken Skin)
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by Gothchyk on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:33:03 AM AEST
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| Your words speak of things that I only find in dreams. Awesome write. |
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Re: Looking for You in your Words (Kissing Your Broken Skin)
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by Rxqueen on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:33:31 AM AEST
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Kissing your broken skin
As if to mend the scars you have within
I want to dress you in my arms
And protect you from all harm
I need you to open your self up to me
Not now not soon just when ever you feel ready
I loved that stanza! |
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Re: Looking for You in your Words (Kissing Your Broken Skin)
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by pUnKa_RaCh on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:50:46 AM AEST
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oh my goodness...what can i say! ur so passionate about this girl....u sound so sweet. its beautiful so beautiful...its sounds like u really want to be there for her. beautiful write and ur just so sweet, its too good to be true.
"We are forever broken you and I
Searching for the true reasons why we cry"
i love that..very
"Both of us are always looking for the fall
Needing something to replace the blade
Wanting a love that is worth risking it all
Both of us no how easily love can fade" so sweet and honest. |
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Re: Looking for You in your Words (Kissing Your Broken Skin)
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by blowfish_jane on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:39:36 AM AEST
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OMG this is so beautiful, i am lost for words on how to describe your poem, great write DP.
Hugs,
Jane x |
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Re: Looking for You in your Words (Kissing Your Broken Skin)
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by little_genna on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 01:40:51 AM AEST
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The rewritten poem is so much better now...
I love all of them though...
John you're amazing!!!!!
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Re: Looking for You in your Words (Kissing Your Broken Skin)
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by BEBE on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 05:33:01 PM AEST
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This is very well written..
great job. :)
I love how you bring out evey thing, i can imagine it perfectly...... we should talk
gymnast2312@aol.com
or just gymnast2312 for aim
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Re: Looking for You in your Words (Kissing Your Broken Skin)
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 11:05:36 PM AEST
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wow this is a beautiful write.. Im amazed.. this is one of the best poems i've ever read before.. your a great poet ..awesome JOB!!
peace and hope
JENNI |
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Re: Looking for You in your Words (Kissing Your Broken Skin)
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 05:29:51 PM AEST
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| very good poems here john. your effort paid off well. perfect as can be. |
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