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Array ( [sid] => 7666 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I STILL REMEMBER [time] => 2002-11-29 23:30:00 [hometext] => " sometimes you try not to think about someone, and the harder you try, the stronger the memory gets.....this is one of those times....." [bodytext] =>
I still remember the time
When yourself was close to mine…
Back when everything was so fine…
I miss you smile and your glowing eyes
If only I shoul’ve been more wise…
I just miss you deep in my heart
Cause I know that from me you’re a part…

It’s time for you to know
That my joy is feeling low…
I want you near…
I just can’t help it, I live in fear….
Fear of forever losing you…
I can’t think about me without you….
Believe me it’s true…

I don’t have a single clue…
Of how to be with you again
In my eyes is starting to rain..
I know that something went wrong
But I know we can make it through
I know we can do it, if we just try…

Stop and think, don’t make me cry…
Just look once more in your heart..
I know I’ll still be around…

I feel really alone!!…
Don’t tell me I’m gone…
Or: “what’s done it’s done….”
Look for that one more chance
And for the past take a glance…

Now that I’ve told you that I still love you
Let’s see if you think it too….
and if you do …
Show me that you care…

Could you still for me be there…..????
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 210 [topic] => 22 [informant] => LivingDeath [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
I STILL REMEMBER

Contributed by LivingDeath on Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 11:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove




I still remember the time
When yourself was close to mine…
Back when everything was so fine…
I miss you smile and your glowing eyes
If only I shoul’ve been more wise…
I just miss you deep in my heart
Cause I know that from me you’re a part…

It’s time for you to know
That my joy is feeling low…
I want you near…
I just can’t help it, I live in fear….
Fear of forever losing you…
I can’t think about me without you….
Believe me it’s true…

I don’t have a single clue…
Of how to be with you again
In my eyes is starting to rain..
I know that something went wrong
But I know we can make it through
I know we can do it, if we just try…

Stop and think, don’t make me cry…
Just look once more in your heart..
I know I’ll still be around…

I feel really alone!!…
Don’t tell me I’m gone…
Or: “what’s done it’s done….”
Look for that one more chance
And for the past take a glance…

Now that I’ve told you that I still love you
Let’s see if you think it too….
and if you do …
Show me that you care…

Could you still for me be there…..????




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Re: I STILL REMEMBER (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Friday, 29th November 2002 @ 11:36:03 PM AEST
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This is so sad it made me
cry so hard. I really hope she
see's this and forgives you and
that possibly you and her can
work things out. This is breathtaking
Any girl would love to read how
one feels this way. Thanks for
sharing this one, and welcome
back my beautiful friend it's good
to have you back writing.
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: I STILL REMEMBER (User Rating: 1 )
by darkkai on Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 12:17:20 AM AEST
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This poem brings back a pain I once felt. I have been there too. powerful stuff, keep it up.


Re: I STILL REMEMBER (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryBunny on Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 12:46:42 AM AEST
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Ah, I feel just like that right now. In fact, I posted a poem about the topic not too long ago. Little different though, I like yours better :-) Nicer analogies. I like the "in my eyes it's starting to rain" line. Awesome poem!!


Re: I STILL REMEMBER (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 30th November 2002 @ 02:26:20 AM AEST
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wow!!...magnificent writing!!!
i really felt this one ,very amotional and true.
thanks for bringing up something that i couldn't get to tell or even write.
a master piece.
yours truly
pamela.


Re: I STILL REMEMBER (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 03:56:07 AM AEST
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I like it and i give you a 5 because your poem was the first poem writtin ont he day i met my husband




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