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Array ( [sid] => 76609 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My Love [time] => 2004-12-20 15:49:44 [hometext] => my new poem. it just came to me a few minutes ago. havent been able to write n e thing in about a month. [bodytext] =>

the blade i love
is the blade i hug
when everything comes tumbling down
spiraling down, falling to the ground
like a ton of bricks

the blade i love
is the blade i trust
to keep the secrets of my wounds
the wounds that will not heal
that will not dissapear
for as long as i shall live

the blade i love
is the blade i need
to guide me to my next step
to show me the way
to lighten the path
to eventually lead me out

the blade i love
is the blade that helps
carry away my pain
my thoughts
my life [comments] => 3 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 61 [informant] => humboldtsweetie33 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

My Love

Contributed by humboldtsweetie33 on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 03:49:44 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

the blade i love
is the blade i hug
when everything comes tumbling down
spiraling down, falling to the ground
like a ton of bricks

the blade i love
is the blade i trust
to keep the secrets of my wounds
the wounds that will not heal
that will not dissapear
for as long as i shall live

the blade i love
is the blade i need
to guide me to my next step
to show me the way
to lighten the path
to eventually lead me out

the blade i love
is the blade that helps
carry away my pain
my thoughts
my life

Copyright © humboldtsweetie33 ... [ 2004-12-20 15:49:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Friday, 7th January 2005 @ 09:42:02 PM AEST
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Very good not what I had thought it was going to be..It really is well done

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by humboldthunny17 on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 08:52:14 AM AEST
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it is definately diff. than wut u would think from reading the title, one thing though. STOP!

Re: My Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 13th July 2007 @ 11:12:18 PM AEST
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Good poem wording is strong bern

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