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Array ( [sid] => 76573 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => More Than Life [time] => 2004-12-20 10:27:50 [hometext] => Dying for your love [bodytext] => Slap on the lipstick
Scrawl the makeup cross your face
Forget the love you lost before
I'm here to find a new place

You filled a hole in my heart
But my boat's sinking now
A fatal drop I feel at last
I won't leave without a bow

Meet me on the dock and talk
For one last time I plead
I need another one to love
Just one last romantic feed

With a tug and pull; please
I try; I merely drown in seas
The last attempt has passed
It all seems to go so fast
And I lie in tears and freeze

Time has slowed to a staggering pace
Another one has emerged and in its grace
I run, I mourn, I scar my face
I can't believe my final taste

Sweet sweet love, come back to me
Watch my life fade away
I loved you more than life itself
And this is how I pay [comments] => 1 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Dion [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
More Than Life

Contributed by Dion on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 10:27:50 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



Slap on the lipstick
Scrawl the makeup cross your face
Forget the love you lost before
I'm here to find a new place

You filled a hole in my heart
But my boat's sinking now
A fatal drop I feel at last
I won't leave without a bow

Meet me on the dock and talk
For one last time I plead
I need another one to love
Just one last romantic feed

With a tug and pull; please
I try; I merely drown in seas
The last attempt has passed
It all seems to go so fast
And I lie in tears and freeze

Time has slowed to a staggering pace
Another one has emerged and in its grace
I run, I mourn, I scar my face
I can't believe my final taste

Sweet sweet love, come back to me
Watch my life fade away
I loved you more than life itself
And this is how I pay




Copyright © Dion ... [ 2004-12-20 10:27:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: More Than Life (User Rating: 1 )
by travisk on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 11:03:56 AM AEST
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smart and simple, emotional and felt

feelin' it bud




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