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Array ( [sid] => 76567 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => COME BACK TO ME [time] => 2004-12-20 09:55:50 [hometext] => Asking for another chance.... [bodytext] => How heavy does this burden have to be
That is weighing upon my chest...
It is as if some great beast
Lies upon my breast...
Far too many nights have passed along
Without glancing at ecstasy's door...
Since the day you left me
I cry out for things to be the way they were before...
I would love to be a drop of your blood
Pulsing through your veins
Then you could see for yourself
My love for you that still remains...
And you would know one other thing
As I flowed through your heart
You would understand for sure My Love
That we should never part...

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COME BACK TO ME

Contributed by summerwine on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:55:50 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

How heavy does this burden have to be
That is weighing upon my chest...
It is as if some great beast
Lies upon my breast...
Far too many nights have passed along
Without glancing at ecstasy's door...
Since the day you left me
I cry out for things to be the way they were before...
I would love to be a drop of your blood
Pulsing through your veins
Then you could see for yourself
My love for you that still remains...
And you would know one other thing
As I flowed through your heart
You would understand for sure My Love
That we should never part...

Copyright © summerwine ... [ 2004-12-20 09:55:50]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: COME BACK TO ME (User Rating: 1 )
by SweetRhythm on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 10:01:53 AM AEST
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Awh how beautiful & truly touching. What sensational warm sentiments. Straight from the heart. Great captivating title.
5/5

Corinna

Re: COME BACK TO ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:49:14 PM AEST
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Very passionate write..... Written with such feelings..
Hugs
Jenni

Re: COME BACK TO ME (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 29th December 2004 @ 12:46:18 AM AEST
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Aww touching write. I hope things work out for you.

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