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Array ( [sid] => 76557 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => happy marriage [time] => 2004-12-20 08:31:11 [hometext] => To the friend going to marry [bodytext] => congratulate you lovely girl


you said you will get married
I congratulate you from the buttom of my heart heartily
go to meet your new life happily
your and your lover will be the happiest person
in the world since that very day

You say some fear a bit anxious
you say you afraid of far away from hometown day
tell you my bright girl my sweeter friend
after all people want to grow up
leave parents' really independence of our ability

the person who you love is waving
he is your hope and future
love him to cast on others and hold in the arms bravely
take on heavy burden of family with him
love everyone of his house
Don't forget look for aome time some idle
to come back and see own parents

The marriage is the necessity in our life
the best home after being ripe
nobody hopes oneself is lonely all one's life
wish you and lover every day hand in hand
like holding and having each other in all yourselves life

Step into new life as you
rest the head on altogether as you
cuddling together betweent body and bed as you
round the warm family every day as you
in order to every thing of smiling in life as you
you will be happy and satisfied
wishing you and your lover is happy and successful
everything in your new life close to enjoy as one and share [comments] => 6 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 48 [informant] => holy [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
happy marriage

Contributed by holy on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:31:11 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



congratulate you lovely girl


you said you will get married
I congratulate you from the buttom of my heart heartily
go to meet your new life happily
your and your lover will be the happiest person
in the world since that very day

You say some fear a bit anxious
you say you afraid of far away from hometown day
tell you my bright girl my sweeter friend
after all people want to grow up
leave parents' really independence of our ability

the person who you love is waving
he is your hope and future
love him to cast on others and hold in the arms bravely
take on heavy burden of family with him
love everyone of his house
Don't forget look for aome time some idle
to come back and see own parents

The marriage is the necessity in our life
the best home after being ripe
nobody hopes oneself is lonely all one's life
wish you and lover every day hand in hand
like holding and having each other in all yourselves life

Step into new life as you
rest the head on altogether as you
cuddling together betweent body and bed as you
round the warm family every day as you
in order to every thing of smiling in life as you
you will be happy and satisfied
wishing you and your lover is happy and successful
everything in your new life close to enjoy as one and share




Copyright © holy ... [ 2004-12-20 08:31:11]
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Re: happy marriage (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:35:09 AM AEST
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buttom- * -bottom


Re: happy marriage (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:37:38 AM AEST
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Don't forget look for aome time some idle

dont forget look for some time some idle


Re: happy marriage (User Rating: 1 )
by HellsLibrarian on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:08:18 AM AEST
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It's a lovely sentiment that you're expressing, but there are quite a few grammar and syntax errors that distract from that.


Re: happy marriage (User Rating: 1 )
by MMISS on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:10:54 AM AEST
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that's very sweet! you're such a good friend to write this for her. wonderful poem here!!!


Re: happy marriage (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:23:43 AM AEST
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Hellslibrarian,welcome you.
very glad you are here and found some wrong grammar and syntax.i will learn more from here ,thank you Hellslibrarian,
nice friend ,welcome to correct them in this poetry ,you can write right here and i will know,i will be happy .
may be i write them in chinese style,haha,i will try my best (*_*)(*_*)


Re: happy marriage (User Rating: 1 )
by holy on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 09:28:35 AM AEST
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hi,Mmiss.

when a friend write me she will be married soon and about some fear of marriage ,i have many words want to tell her ,and i cannot speak english well ,i only try to tell some thing that i think.

friend is bestest teacher of mine ,i love to hear from you.thankful.smile.




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