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Array ( [sid] => 76547 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Guilty (backsliding) [time] => 2004-12-20 05:16:00 [hometext] => this is a freestyle-inspired to write one becoz of scotts : ) plz read this coz it all TRUE [bodytext] => Pulse racing cuz once again these damn demonz Im facing, they want me deceased so they whisper "dopes amazing...../
Inhale that magic cloud, exhale and cough loud, I see the smile emerging cuz peace you have found/
are you crazy girl?? kill that sac, stay up all night flowin you write your best work like that, all twacked, relapsed, pack the glass bowl,watch it crack back, its ok to get a little off track, tell your conscience to get up and str8 pack, cuz while you're in "dope world" remaining heartless is where your minds at."/
Damn these demons make poision look like a christmas package, got me hittin some **** while im in the bathroom changin my bandage. I was sober as hell when I gutted my self, if I pack dynamite sober, all twacked out I pack stealths./
Lord please put your hand on my mind, cuz I know this pipe full of **** is nuttin but lies, I know it wont make it better cuz Ive tried and I've tried, always chasing evil, cuz out here the blind lead the blind, if my life was a movie I'd delete after I rewind, go back to before I left my innocence behind, should be running to God for causin me not to flatline, still Im feelin lost, wanna rip a fat line/
Boy or boy when will I sit back and think? I need to sacrifice the wordly pleasures for my own souls sake, used to school youngsters but now they see my recent paths a mistake, went from a mentor to a nobody, still so many can relate/
So many lost just like me, so many living in a prison not knowin how to break free, whats sad is I've seen the light but chose things that paid off instantly, Im guilty already cuz Im knowin the truth but showin others deceit, taking chances with my future, and when it gets scary to God I retreat, but look at my dumb *** chasing evil once Im back on my feet, guilty I am, from my head to my feet/ [comments] => 3 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 66 [informant] => bluebird [notes] => ......edited by mod_6 for language...20-12-04 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => drugabuse )
Guilty (backsliding)

Contributed by bluebird on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 05:16:00 AM in AEST
Topic: drugabuse



Pulse racing cuz once again these damn demonz Im facing, they want me deceased so they whisper "dopes amazing...../
Inhale that magic cloud, exhale and cough loud, I see the smile emerging cuz peace you have found/
are you crazy girl?? kill that sac, stay up all night flowin you write your best work like that, all twacked, relapsed, pack the glass bowl,watch it crack back, its ok to get a little off track, tell your conscience to get up and str8 pack, cuz while you're in "dope world" remaining heartless is where your minds at."/
Damn these demons make poision look like a christmas package, got me hittin some **** while im in the bathroom changin my bandage. I was sober as hell when I gutted my self, if I pack dynamite sober, all twacked out I pack stealths./
Lord please put your hand on my mind, cuz I know this pipe full of **** is nuttin but lies, I know it wont make it better cuz Ive tried and I've tried, always chasing evil, cuz out here the blind lead the blind, if my life was a movie I'd delete after I rewind, go back to before I left my innocence behind, should be running to God for causin me not to flatline, still Im feelin lost, wanna rip a fat line/
Boy or boy when will I sit back and think? I need to sacrifice the wordly pleasures for my own souls sake, used to school youngsters but now they see my recent paths a mistake, went from a mentor to a nobody, still so many can relate/
So many lost just like me, so many living in a prison not knowin how to break free, whats sad is I've seen the light but chose things that paid off instantly, Im guilty already cuz Im knowin the truth but showin others deceit, taking chances with my future, and when it gets scary to God I retreat, but look at my dumb *** chasing evil once Im back on my feet, guilty I am, from my head to my feet/




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Re: Guilty (backsliding) (User Rating: 1 )
by sara7dryad on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 05:43:25 AM AEST
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wow, that was really awesome! This poem is exactly how I feel! The name caught my eye and the subject matter hit a nerve...You use your words well-awesome freestyling...


Re: Guilty (backsliding) (User Rating: 1 )
by Kay-Kay on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 08:27:23 AM AEST
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good freestyle it has good word usage and rhyming nice job
Kay-Kay


Re: Guilty (backsliding) (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 12:55:31 AM AEST
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I loved it. I can totally relate... This was a good free style, it gave me chills, lol. I love this type of writing,it is definately my favorite. It was messy and unclean just like the message. perfect.




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