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Array ( [sid] => 76540 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => little girl [time] => 2004-12-20 03:44:16 [hometext] => this poem is about a little girl being in many places alone and how someone like me could prevent her from being alone. [bodytext] => Little girl in the dark please come into the light,
i want to see your lovely smile your face is not in sight.
I need a friend now wont you please be that one for me,
and then we can look to find a friend which will make three.

Little girl in the rain can't you see you're wet,
end your rainy days now you're making me upset.
It's sad,wet and cold and you're showers never end,
i feel your pain and sorrow so my heart to you i lend.

Little girl in the light your smile is so sweet,
can i say your quite unique form your head down to your feet.
It is true that you are special and it's easy to see,
that in great time you will be a special part of me.

Little girl in my heart the love you send is pure,
you pump it all around me and it's endless that's for sure.
You're the one who makes me shine in your loving stream,
we will share our paisson cos' together we're a team. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 16 [informant] => kaymarie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FriendshipPoetry )
little girl

Contributed by kaymarie on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 03:44:16 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



Little girl in the dark please come into the light,
i want to see your lovely smile your face is not in sight.
I need a friend now wont you please be that one for me,
and then we can look to find a friend which will make three.

Little girl in the rain can't you see you're wet,
end your rainy days now you're making me upset.
It's sad,wet and cold and you're showers never end,
i feel your pain and sorrow so my heart to you i lend.

Little girl in the light your smile is so sweet,
can i say your quite unique form your head down to your feet.
It is true that you are special and it's easy to see,
that in great time you will be a special part of me.

Little girl in my heart the love you send is pure,
you pump it all around me and it's endless that's for sure.
You're the one who makes me shine in your loving stream,
we will share our paisson cos' together we're a team.




Copyright © kaymarie ... [ 2004-12-20 03:44:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: little girl (User Rating: 1 )
by bluebird on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 04:01:14 AM AEST
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THis is a beautiful piece of writing. Thankyou so much for posting it,it meant alot..
I just found out that this five year old girl that I look after and calls me sis is the daughter of my bestfriend that died in feb,the father had taken her away from my bestfriend at birth.
so it really does mean alot.Thankyou
~keep the faith~
BB


Re: little girl (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 04:04:20 AM AEST
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wow, this is awesome, well done!!!


Re: little girl (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 04:11:18 AM AEST
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This is an excellent write, it made me cry. Great write.




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