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Array ( [sid] => 76521 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DARK AGES [time] => 2004-12-19 23:36:32 [hometext] => PLEASE COMMENT ON MY WRITTING [bodytext] => Through the dark ages I lie,
oh how much i cry.

I call for help,
but all i get is a big fat whelp.

I think i have and obsession,
but all i feel is an expression.

When I start to feel that I have peace,
my body just begins to cease.

This is my current life,
but I feel as if im a knife.

Oh the pain im in,
please Lord let me renue my self again. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 61 [informant] => bebe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

DARK AGES

Contributed by bebe on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 11:36:32 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Through the dark ages I lie,
oh how much i cry.

I call for help,
but all i get is a big fat whelp.

I think i have and obsession,
but all i feel is an expression.

When I start to feel that I have peace,
my body just begins to cease.

This is my current life,
but I feel as if im a knife.

Oh the pain im in,
please Lord let me renue my self again.

Copyright © bebe ... [ 2004-12-19 23:36:32]
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Re: DARK AGES (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 11:39:19 PM AEST
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Nice work. Thank you for sharing :-)

Re: DARK AGES (User Rating: 1 )
by Summerwine on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 12:41:42 AM AEST
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I think your expression is the way of renewing yourself.... well written, Yvonne

Re: DARK AGES (User Rating: 1 )
by corrupted_minds on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 03:00:55 AM AEST
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Nice short write.

Corrupted Minds

Re: DARK AGES (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 10:08:23 PM AEST
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BeBe
Whelp ?
I hope you are not in an abusive situation. If so RUN tell the police a minister or friend get the help if this is what you need. I found your poem a little scary--Hope I'm wrong.
write more
Peace of Christ be at your side.
Sinned

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