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Array ( [sid] => 76479 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => blankly staring [time] => 2004-12-19 16:42:56 [hometext] => [bodytext] => blankly staring
so calm and tranquil
listening to the beat of angels' wings
like the beating of her heart

listening to the angel speak
in the tongues of many nations
but she understands
it'll be okay

she's breathing heavy now
grasping every breath
her heart beats slowly dying
soon she will be at rest

the angel touches her cheek
gracing her with its presence
but blankly she stares
just waiting.....waiting for the moment

the crimson red river
flows frome her veins
leaving her cold
leaving her world slowly darkening

she sits in the corner
not breathing now
not listening to the beat of angels' wings
just waiting....waiting for the moment
and blankly staring
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blankly staring

Contributed by xxDeathxTOxKristixx on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:42:56 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

blankly staring
so calm and tranquil
listening to the beat of angels' wings
like the beating of her heart

listening to the angel speak
in the tongues of many nations
but she understands
it'll be okay

she's breathing heavy now
grasping every breath
her heart beats slowly dying
soon she will be at rest

the angel touches her cheek
gracing her with its presence
but blankly she stares
just waiting.....waiting for the moment

the crimson red river
flows frome her veins
leaving her cold
leaving her world slowly darkening

she sits in the corner
not breathing now
not listening to the beat of angels' wings
just waiting....waiting for the moment
and blankly staring

Copyright © xxDeathxTOxKristixx ... [ 2004-12-19 16:42:56]
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Re: blankly staring (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:50:49 PM AEST
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the poem is sad but also beautiful nice work.

Re: blankly staring (User Rating: 1 )
by Apolla on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 07:14:27 PM AEST
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This poem left me in awe. It truely was a very beautiful write.

Re: blankly staring (User Rating: 1 )
by Uncertain_Oblivion on Thursday, 14th September 2006 @ 05:44:26 PM AEST
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I agree...sad and beautiful.

the end was the sad part. Who has time for waiting? Love your username.

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