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I remember a time when I thought you were the kindest person.
When I thought you were the smartest person I knew,
You could do anything you set your mind to do.
I was so proud of you, proud that you were you.
I had all the faith in the world that you would someday be someone great.
I always stood behind your every decision and beside you when others hoped you would fail.
Then one day I grew up and saw you for the person you truly were.
You are a weak depressed dreamer, a wonderer, a drunk and a failure.
I could not bear to look at you another moment.
So with tear filled eyes, I turned away from the mirror and walked away.

Written By: Sharon Angel
12/19/04 [comments] => 7 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 61 [informant] => SharonAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

I Remember

Contributed by SharonAngel on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:39:18 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I Remember

I remember a time when I thought you were the kindest person.
When I thought you were the smartest person I knew,
You could do anything you set your mind to do.
I was so proud of you, proud that you were you.
I had all the faith in the world that you would someday be someone great.
I always stood behind your every decision and beside you when others hoped you would fail.
Then one day I grew up and saw you for the person you truly were.
You are a weak depressed dreamer, a wonderer, a drunk and a failure.
I could not bear to look at you another moment.
So with tear filled eyes, I turned away from the mirror and walked away.

Written By: Sharon Angel
12/19/04

Copyright © SharonAngel ... [ 2004-12-19 16:39:18]
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Re: I Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 04:43:06 PM AEST
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good write wish i could remember like that when i looked at myself

Re: I Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 05:10:05 PM AEST
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Great write..really very touching...loved it..and hope you start seeing yourself as before soon again....
Hugs
Jenni

Re: I Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Angelic_Demon on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 05:51:36 PM AEST
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Hey Sharon... This is a really good write. Thanks for sharing...

Blessed Be,
Mars

Re: I Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:21:39 PM AEST
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This is a great write....and one that i can relate to so well....excellent job.....i absolutely loved it....if u ever need to talk to someone just PM me

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: I Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 10:05:57 PM AEST
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good poem, i feel the same way when i look in the mirror.

Re: I Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by DanishPoet on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 12:14:26 PM AEST
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A mirror shows only how you feel.
Great written.

Toke

Re: I Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 04:29:22 PM AEST
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wow..... hugs n' love nessa

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