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Array ( [sid] => 76450 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Growing Demands on a Young Boy’s Heart [time] => 2004-12-19 12:18:48 [hometext] => lots of my emotions went into the writing of this! please read and comment :) thankyou!! [bodytext] => Growing demands
On a young boy’s heart,
New issues arrive
And tears it apart,
Wanting more
But receiving less,
The poor boys heart
Is left in a mess,
He attempts to cope
And see it through,
But instead it mounts
And out of view

Move on he’s told
It’s been and gone,
The love you hold
Must be withdrawn,
You’ve had your chance
Just let her go,
It’s not you she seeks
Don’t hide, you know,
The love you have
Will be used again,
But for this girl
It can’t remain [comments] => 2 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 48 [informant] => sean88 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Growing Demands on a Young Boy’s Heart

Contributed by sean88 on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:18:48 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Growing demands
On a young boy’s heart,
New issues arrive
And tears it apart,
Wanting more
But receiving less,
The poor boys heart
Is left in a mess,
He attempts to cope
And see it through,
But instead it mounts
And out of view

Move on he’s told
It’s been and gone,
The love you hold
Must be withdrawn,
You’ve had your chance
Just let her go,
It’s not you she seeks
Don’t hide, you know,
The love you have
Will be used again,
But for this girl
It can’t remain

Copyright Â© sean88 ... [ 2004-12-19 12:18:48]
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Re: Growing Demands on a Young Boy’s Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:19:35 PM AEST
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that was an emotional write, well composed, well done,
pixie xx

Re: Growing Demands on a Young Boy’s Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by blackholesun on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:16:45 PM AEST
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this is very sad,i feel for you and i hope you find someone with a heart equal to yours,peace&love.

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