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Array ( [sid] => 76448 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => follow my Shadow [time] => 2004-12-19 12:09:13 [hometext] => this is one of my favorite ones..tell me what you think [bodytext] => i hate it
i hate it all
the way i live
the way i am
why am i like this

i'll never find someone
the one that's made for me
she was lost in the making
it's never felt right..anything

something has to be wrong
wrong with me
i see all these perfect girls
made for other guys

i would kill for that feeling
the feeling that everythign is right
i wish i could make it happen
but i can't

so i follow my shadow
falling further behind everyday
where are you [comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 2 [informant] => frozenintime [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

follow my Shadow

Contributed by frozenintime on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:09:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

i hate it
i hate it all
the way i live
the way i am
why am i like this

i'll never find someone
the one that's made for me
she was lost in the making
it's never felt right..anything

something has to be wrong
wrong with me
i see all these perfect girls
made for other guys

i would kill for that feeling
the feeling that everythign is right
i wish i could make it happen
but i can't

so i follow my shadow
falling further behind everyday
where are you

Copyright © frozenintime ... [ 2004-12-19 12:09:13]
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Re: follow my Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:42:11 PM AEST
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good write but it sucks when u find her and she isnt really what u wanted but yea im still lookin for that girl cuz i miss the feeling good luck

Re: follow my Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Summerwine on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:20:28 PM AEST
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A good write about searching for the right girl....sometimes you don't have to look so hard

Re: follow my Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 07:14:44 PM AEST
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good write my friend and remember, there is someone out there for you, and when you least expect it, she will find you.............Mike

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