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There is no way to make it plain,

For you I love, no other one,
As you lie in there in mourning sun,

So loved by all, but mostly me,
It makes it hard for me to see,

Oh why did you die and leave me here?
So all alone in so much fear?

I thought you loved me, I thought you cared,
I thought you wanted me, but this you dared,

And still I love you, I always will,
So rest in peace, my beloved . . . . [comments] => 4 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 32 [informant] => redtempest13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Bill

Contributed by redtempest13 on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 12:02:43 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

For reasons that I can't explain,
There is no way to make it plain,

For you I love, no other one,
As you lie in there in mourning sun,

So loved by all, but mostly me,
It makes it hard for me to see,

Oh why did you die and leave me here?
So all alone in so much fear?

I thought you loved me, I thought you cared,
I thought you wanted me, but this you dared,

And still I love you, I always will,
So rest in peace, my beloved . . . .

Copyright © redtempest13 ... [ 2004-12-19 12:02:43]
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Re: Bill (User Rating: 1 )
by redtempest13 on Tuesday, 8th February 2005 @ 02:58:28 AM AEST
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PLease comment on this. I would really like to know what everyone thinks.....
-Gin-

Re: Bill (User Rating: 1 )
by BloodsINK on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 05:14:45 PM AEST
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i really like this, losing someone my self in past years i relised that no matter what youll always rember them.. and love them and never forget the good times.. this poem is great and reflexs the love 2 people will always share :) thanx for sharing it

Re: Bill (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Monday, 14th March 2005 @ 08:06:24 PM AEST
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I like this poem a lot. I think most anyone can really relate to the angry feeling you get one leaves, but that's not unusual, it's just because you weren't quite ready to let them go. Great poem.
Katie

Re: Bill (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th March 2005 @ 01:39:54 AM AEST
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My Grandmother Elenor on my fathers side was going to marry a man named Bill but he died, Id like her to read this but im afraid she'd cry.
But it is Lovely enough to bring tears to her eye's!

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